Review Detail of Kenai12_ in Making Pokemon Games popular in New World
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Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.
Making Pokemon Games popular in New World
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Kenai12_Lv14Kenai12_
No problem! Really like the concept and story so far but I’d really look into running your stuff through grammarly before posting. It may not be perfect but it does help a lot of times.
LORD_INDRATH:Thank you for the review 💓
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Kenai12_:No problem! Really like the concept and story so far but I’d really look into running your stuff through grammarly before posting. It may not be perfect but it does help a lot of times.
Kamikaze_EagleLv4Kamikaze_Eagle