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Congrats on 100! 🎉 🎊 🎉
Loving what you’re doing so far, the writing isn’t perfect but it’s still readable and doesn’t take away too much from the story. I am really looking forward to you introducing nuzlocke’s and peoples reactions to such a way to play the game. That being said please keep going 🙏
Thanks for another great chapter 🙏
To be fair, the world record is nearly 2 hours 😂
Thank you for the chapter 🙏
Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.
In case this isn’t evident by you having no likes on this comment, and 9 on the comment below, you’re dead wrong.
Welcome back! Thanks for not dropping 🙏
Nope, sliver is correct. Silver is completely wrong.
Thanks for another chapter glad you’re still going 🙏
All will bow before the bringer of corn 👑
Liking what’s here already tbh, growth is a progressive thing so I say no need to redo the whole thing