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Endo_Cero
Endo_CeroLv11yr
2023-08-04 14:27

5 star review for a fanfic whose mc is not from konoha( you have no idea how hard this is to find.....everyone seems to love konoha and hiruzen😆😆😆) ps: interesting until chapter 9(no spoilers ...only the mc is a jinchuriki❤️❤️❤️)

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Sammy_Amigo
Sammy_AmigoLv14

ur comment about "everyone loving "hiruzen" " is disturbing please remove it🥶

Stolen_Name
Stolen_NameLv4

Going out of Konoha means going out of plot. When you do that, you need to make a plot of your own. It's not really easy to do so. Plus, out of all the villages shown in the whole series, Konoha is the most decent one to live in. Not to mention, prewritten waifus! Konoha has the best of them.

Endo_Cero
Endo_CeroLv1

my problem was never with konoha, but almost all the fanfic focuses on that village and my question is how many times can you tell the same story without falling into monotony? Because of this, the novels today have lost freshness and originality, so when we leave there we can see aspects of the series that in my opinion we never saw (even in the original series). PS: I know it's difficult to write a plot that doesn't be the canonical....but that gives it a different touch....also sometime I would like to see konoha lose (crazy no war or battle lost...because kishimoto empowered that village a lot😏 )

Stolen_Name:Going out of Konoha means going out of plot. When you do that, you need to make a plot of your own. It's not really easy to do so. Plus, out of all the villages shown in the whole series, Konoha is the most decent one to live in. Not to mention, prewritten waifus! Konoha has the best of them.
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

There are many fanfics about Konoha losing, in the top fanfics there are 2 or more if I'm not mistaken

Endo_Cero:my problem was never with konoha, but almost all the fanfic focuses on that village and my question is how many times can you tell the same story without falling into monotony? Because of this, the novels today have lost freshness and originality, so when we leave there we can see aspects of the series that in my opinion we never saw (even in the original series). PS: I know it's difficult to write a plot that doesn't be the canonical....but that gives it a different touch....also sometime I would like to see konoha lose (crazy no war or battle lost...because kishimoto empowered that village a lot😏 )
Endo_Cero
Endo_CeroLv1

there is one or the other......but they are mc op who literally do what they want, I want to read a progressive and realistic novel of that ps: the same... thanks for the information ❤️❤️❤️

Gabichu_Yeah:There are many fanfics about Konoha losing, in the top fanfics there are 2 or more if I'm not mistaken
Endo_Cero
Endo_CeroLv1

Name?🤔🤔🤔

Gabichu_Yeah:There are many fanfics about Konoha losing, in the top fanfics there are 2 or more if I'm not mistaken
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

In these 2 Konoha loses, there are others but I would have to look very low in my library or in other MTL pages and honestly I am too lazy Saving the Uchiha by Starting with the Destruction of the Leaf Uchiha: Destroy Konoha at the Start!

Endo_Cero:Name?🤔🤔🤔
JustHavinFunReadin
JustHavinFunReadinLv11

Want a village that is safer than Konoha? There is Kumo, which is definitely safer and nicer to live in. Pretty sure Iwa is also still safer if we consider Danzo existing. Then there are also lots of smaller villages, which are safer because no one cares about them enough to attack them.

Stolen_Name:Going out of Konoha means going out of plot. When you do that, you need to make a plot of your own. It's not really easy to do so. Plus, out of all the villages shown in the whole series, Konoha is the most decent one to live in. Not to mention, prewritten waifus! Konoha has the best of them.
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