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2020-07-26 00:19

You don't have to point out that the mc is chinese, your judgemental and dependent stereotypical nature is already bleeding through the character. Hays... Another whimp with an op power who likes to judge and compare social status while only liking movie characters (cause it's not like you can make a lovable, strong and courageous female character that wasn't from the source material) and somehow makes a harem that totally works without putting real work in it. Yep. Cause love works forever as long as you're strong handsome, wealthy, and has an impractically big dick. Mc can also **** for a long hours straight cause normal people don't get bored pushing and pulling their dick in a repetitive manner for several hours. Oh, and normal women's vagina doesn't get destroyed fucking an absurdly huge dick while being a supposed virgin. It's not like things like friction exist, right? It goes on for some time, right? Until you make him op to the point that youhave to unreasonably nerf him which leads to raging readers. After sometime, it'll be on hiatus and you'll promise to write again but would never really finish it.

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