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Kira_Chiya
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2020-07-11 01:18

5 stars for your effort ❤❤😂 The Chinese one wasn't good ... it was rushed and lacks purpose 😑😑 I hope you edit it 😍 I really hate the 140 word thing 😑😑

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rishit1
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Thanks for your support......and if you have read the original then you will already be able to feel the changes...like (with kyle and Peggy conversations)....and i also plan to do something about hydra before he leaves earth

Kira_Chiya
Kira_ChiyaLv4

I read it on my second account and i noticed the change 😁 Thank you ❤

rishit1:Thanks for your support......and if you have read the original then you will already be able to feel the changes...like (with kyle and Peggy conversations)....and i also plan to do something about hydra before he leaves earth
MagicSand
MagicSandLv6

Hey mr.rishit1, about Steve cards, is it martial art master or Close-Quarter Combat master?

rishit1:Thanks for your support......and if you have read the original then you will already be able to feel the changes...like (with kyle and Peggy conversations)....and i also plan to do something about hydra before he leaves earth
MagicSand
MagicSandLv6

Hey mr.rishit1, about Steve cards, is it martial art master or Close-Quarter Combat master?

rishit1:Thanks for your support......and if you have read the original then you will already be able to feel the changes...like (with kyle and Peggy conversations)....and i also plan to do something about hydra before he leaves earth
KhaosReader
KhaosReaderLv14

Author can re-continue?

rishit1:Thanks for your support......and if you have read the original then you will already be able to feel the changes...like (with kyle and Peggy conversations)....and i also plan to do something about hydra before he leaves earth
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