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descriptive, emotive language that can improve connections with readers would be good. dont be shy to experiment with comedy other than romance, it lightens the mood well. i think it can go well just need more time for it to grow
descriptive words could be used more, in my opinion, I think emotive language furthers a better connection with the reader so try focus on that. take your time to practice and further it, experiment with different ideas.
just make sure that emotive language is more used to connect your readers to the story more. i think stephan should have more interactions to build up this feeling
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