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Great can’t wait for chapters

Hmm I love the hero harem novel but I hope the corruption and Netorare is a bit different. I like the novel so far and it has some good potential

Anyone recommend any Netorare novel or cuck story. Read most of the ones on this site and want more. Thanks. And thanks for the chapters author love the book

The beginning of this novel was a bit boring and not too interesting. I have read a few cultivation novels and this one is quite good overall. The increasing cultivation through thieving is quite interesting. I feel the harem stuff was quite overused and while I overall like some of the harem girls I honestly don't care too much about them. But this novel is overall solid with the power and world building. A few things that makes me really annoyed are English author's who make very complex esoteric power realms that make me have no idea what is going on. like chill out a little bit with the weird power realms that I basically just ignore and when the mc goes up a power realm I have no idea what realm has actually at I just know has a little bit stronger

I'm very disappointed in this novel. Basically mc goes back in time to do shit over. But the problem is that it feels like has never played the game before. Every blacksmith in the world uses the technology tree to make stuff. But the mc is acting like its the first time has ever seen the technology tree. The mc is also extremely childish and innocent most of the time, but I feel like out of nowhere he will just turn into a blood thirsty dude who will kill your whole family and think nothing about it. And something that really annoys me is that a lot of arcs should not be there or should be way shorter. After like 300 chapters I stopped reading but there is a arc for something called the 4 pillars which is a inheritance for mc and three others. But the thing is I went ahead and read the titles of later chapters and the arc for the inheritance is going to last something like 300 chapters which is ridiculous. I actually like most of these types of books and can get over a few problems. But this novel turned a premise that I actually like a lot into a mess. I feel it could have been a lot better then it was.

This is gonna be good. Nice direction on the story

The translating quality is absolutely terrible. I’ve read a lot of novels and a lot of them have pretty hard writing quality. But this novel has one of the worst I’ve read so far. It’s broken engrish.

You could do it where since Ella won’t sleep with Leon anymore he gets jealous and slips a aphrodisiac pill or some shit. Then he sleeps with her impregnating her. Would be quite hot

I hope Ella gets pregnant from Leon.

Definitely get revenge. I love the cuck shit but he definitely needs to get revenge on Leon. I also wouldn’t mind him basically breaking up with the fiancée’s. I’ve read some novels and you could go down the demon lord path where he decides to become the demon lord. But overall I love the novel keep it up. It’s quite well written for the genre and has a solid story