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MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

Autor: TrueDawn
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"All I need is a second chance..." "A second chance to make things right." Watching the world in front of him crumble before his very eyes, Valyr felt immense regret. He and his comrades made sure to prepare for every possible mishap, for every possible thing that could've gone wrong... yet in the end, their side still lost. Feeling his consciousness slip away from him, the young man screamed out into the heavens, wishing at his dying moment to get a second chance. A second chance to make things right. Thankfully, the heavens responded. Sending him back into the world where everything began, Valyr was reborn as an NPC of Greater Beyond a year before the game went live. Armed with all of the knowledge he'd gained from his past life, as well as the goal of not wanting the past to repeat itself, he was going to make sure they won the final battle this time, stopping at nothing to achieve it. Though, before he could do that, he'd first have to pick up the path he ventured in the past. ---------- Feel free to join the Discord: https://discord.gg/FU7fdYwaau

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Chapter 1A Second Chance

'If only we had realized what was happening sooner…'

'If only we were stronger…' 

'This wouldn't have happened.'

These words echoed incessantly within Valyr's mind as he watched the world he had lived his whole life in, the world he knew as Earth, gradually crumble into nothingness due to a game.

A game that everyone had no choice but to partake in.

Thinking about everything that led up to this point, Valyr asked himself where everything had gone wrong. 

As far as he could remember, all of them were informed a long time ago as to what kind of battle they were about to head into. 

Thus, it went without saying that they had prepared plans, countermeasures, and skills for certain situations that might arise in advance. 

With that level of preparation, one should expect that their side would most likely win. After all, there was a saying that went 'Knowing the enemy means winning half the battle.'

Yet, against all odds, the exact opposite happened.

Being at the front lines at the time, Valyr witnessed how the opposing side utterly ravaged theirs. 

With both of his eyes taking all the information that it could, all he could see around him was true and utter despair.

Without a doubt, those on his side were no match for the ones opposing them. Because of that, all of them eventually lost even the final shreds of their hope as the final battle ended on a somber note.

With those memories vividly flashing through his very eyes while his body was still drifting off in space, whether it was desperation or optimism that spurred him forward, he decided to make a wish to the heavens above. 

Even though he knew very well that he'd die very soon. 

Closing his eyes, he uttered out words only he could hear, letting the void around him do its task.

"If there's ever a being up above listening to me… I hope you could give me another shot."

"No. A second chance to make things right."

"Let me start all over again. Let me correct all the mistakes I've made."

"Please."

As he had finished saying those words, Valyr felt like his body gradually separate itself from reality, the fluids in it gradually evaporating off into space as he felt his body become unbearably cold. 

Eventually, his consciousness also headed towards the same path, slowly slipping off as Valyr embraced the sensation of true darkness.

However, not even a minute later, this darkness was quickly replaced by light, jolting Valyr's consciousness awake as he felt the current situation to be somewhat peculiar.

'Have I… have I been sent to the afterlife?' he asked himself, thinking that the best way to find out was to move his body. 

Surprisingly, in accordance with his thoughts, his arms and legs moved in response. With that, he felt that he was lying on something that was somewhat prickly yet also somewhat soft.

Letting his curiosity get the better of him, Valyr eventually opened his eyes, swiftly being greeted by the sight of a vast blue sky far above him.

At this point, he had realized that the heavens had indeed given him a second chance, giving him the opportunity to be reborn. 

Though, as he looked around for a bit more, this hope gradually flickered off, soon understanding that the heavens had only granted a part of his wish.

Far above him was a vast blue sky with billowing clouds similar to that of Earth's. However, the landscape that surrounded him was anything but similar, instead showing him the beauty of nature. 

Rather than be greeted by the sight of buildings, his sight was instead filled to the brim with vast plains, rock formations, as well as plants and trees as far as the eye could see.

Of course, that wasn't all. 

It also did not take long for him to notice that he was lying on top of a cart of hay, which was attached to the back of a wooden carriage.

Scratching his head for a bit, Valyr let out a low sigh. "I guess the heavens are telling me one way or another that my wish was just a bit too much for them." 

"Haah… is this their way of telling me to relax and enjoy this new life I've been given?"

Ding!

Just as he was about to accept his current situation for what it was, a bell chime resounded throughout the area, causing Valyr to look around as he wondered where it came from. 

For a second, his eyes widened in shock, feeling that the chime was awfully familiar to him.

Ding!

A few seconds later, the chime had sounded once more. However, rather than linger for a bit and disappear, it had instead given Valyr something more tangible.

Accompanying the sound he had just heard, something he had never expected to see in his current setting appeared in front of him.

A screen.

Rubbing his eyes in slight disbelief, Valyr sat up straight as he looked at the screen in front of him. 

At first, he asked himself if the heavens had taken pity on him after not granting his entire wish. 

After all, he had read multiple stories in the past where the main character would obtain a system of sorts that would help them adjust into their next world. 

However, as he gradually read through the text on the screen before him, these thoughts instantly disappeared, his body gradually shuddered from the excitement he felt.

[Initializing the Non-Player Character Advancement System…]

[Initial stages have been integrated. Modifying system to Variant GB…]

[Identity confirmed. Current user has been identified as Valyr Zeihardt…]

[Character has been fully examined. Information has been added into the system.]

[System fully activated. User can now access the system at any time.]

'You're telling me… the heavens actually listened to my wish?' 

At this point, no other thought could be found in his mind other than this. 

Clenching his fists in excitement before raising them into the air, tears began to stream down Valyr's face as he was now certain that the heavens had heard his wish.

Which was to be given a second shot at everything.

Taking a few deep breaths as he wiped away the tears on his face, Valyr pondered over his current situation a bit more, making sure to not miss every detail he came across. 

Though, in the midst of his thought process, he inwardly let out a mocking chuckle. "To think such a small change in my mindset would make such a great impact."

Pushing such thoughts to the side, he continued to look around his surroundings as the carriage he was on continued moving. 

At some point, Valyr eventually found a few familiar things he took note of in his surroundings, prompting him to try and browse through his memories from his past life.

Surprisingly, as he tried to recall where he was at the moment, he had noticed that next to no memories from his past life was erased during his death. 

In fact, if he tried hard enough, he felt like he could recall every bit of information that he sought.

'Does this mean I could recall everything that happened in my past life?' 

As he asked this question to himself, he decided to put his theory to the test, rummaging through almost all of his memories before eventually finding a piece of information that matched his current location.

"Considering the familiarity I have with the place and the direction this carriage is heading in, we're currently near the north side of the Veleos Plains," he murmured. 

"As for the place this carriage is heading to… judging by the roughness and size of the road, we're getting closer to a village."

"Then again, I could just ask the carriage driver instead." 

At these words, he faintly smiled, climbing up the stack of hay to find a young man at the front loosely holding onto the reins of a well-fed steed.

'In any case, it's quite surreal to find out I've been reborn into the game itself,' thought the young man to himself after thinking about his current situation for a bit more. 

'And I've turned into an NPC at that.'

'Then again, something like that isn't really a bad thing.' 

Lying down on the hay, a grin appeared on Valyr's face as he gazed up at the sky once more.

'After all, in the early game, there's far more things an NPC can do that a player can't.'

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(This review has been made after I posted Chapter 315.) Hey there. It's been almost six months since I've started writing this novel, so I think it's about due time for me to give another review to this novel from my perspective. Of course, if you take a look at the latest reviews I've gotten, you'd see that a great portion of them say that MC acts incredibly cowardly and newbie-like for someone who has a lot of experience, with some of them even talking about how I rely on a certain phrase a lot of the time (the phrase in question is "could not help but"). From this point onward, there's a possibility that I might spoil a few things about the story, which I would like to apologize in advance for. However, I'll still try my best to not spoil it. First and foremost, let me talk about my reliance on a few key phrases, with the most glaring one you'd find while reading the story is the counter for "could not help but" in the paragraph comments. Then again, there are a few other key phrases I tend to use as a crutch throughout the novel, but let me point out that English is not my first language. Aside from that, I've taken a great portion of the inputs you've given me, which I sincerely appreciate, and have varied my usage of words ever since. From Chapter 200 onwards, rarely has the "could not help but" phrase ever been used. But alas, reviews mentioning it still pop up, so I guess worrying about is useless in the end. Moving on from that, let's talk about the MC's personality at the beginning of the novel. Similar to the active change I've made towards the omission of the usage of certain phrases, I've also taken action towards changing the MC's personality outright at Chapter 115 into something that was more in line with what people expect from someone with a lot of experience. But once again, I still get reviews about how they don't like MC's personality at the beginning and how they call him multiple names under the sun. Believe me when I say I've already taken note of it and that I am planning to rewrite the beginning of the story once I graduate college (which would happen hopefully a few months after I post this review). I'm not oblivious towards MC's personality at the beginning, especially if I know why he acts like that in the first place. In the end, I just wanted to make this review to tell everyone who is reading and who is planning to read this novel a couple of things. For those who have read my novel up to the latest chapter and are continuing to read it, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. And for those who are planning to pick up the book from the title and the synopsis, just keep an open mind. It's part of the reason why I made at least 90 chapters of the novel free, after all. Of course, I'd like it if you get to around Chapter 115 at the very least, but I won't hold it against you if you don't. Once again, I would like to thank everyone who has given me support and constructive criticism of what I've been writing thus far, making me realize that I still have a lot to improve on. I hope you enjoy the journey the novel shall take you on. (This review shall be removed once the beginning of the story has been rewritten to fit the overall narrative better.)

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Disclaimer- review made at chapter 200 Pretty good so far. Doesn't excel at anything in particular, but very solid in every aspect. writing quality: 4* Good. I mean, there's not much more to say. No glaring issues, decent VSPaG. Not mind-blowing enough for 5 stars, but more than enough for a Webnovel. Story development: 4* Excellent so far. Relatively slow paced, but always interesting and has an overarching plot that is starting to come into play now. Character design: 4* This is a weird one. Sometimes the characters are weird and behave slightly awkwardly compared to previously, while other times I (mentally) squeal in delight due to a surprising but great decision to add a new dimension to a character or give them a closure that they need in a story like this. Overall though, the reason the book scores well despite its inconsistencies is the linking of characters we met previously with new plot points, which works superbly. The obvious example is the MC discovering his new body's past, but other examples include the village leader and the dungeon, as well as one of the MC's quests with the first person he meets after his "reincarnation". updating stability: 5* Honestly just great. I give big props to anyone that can consistently release a chapter a day every day of the week, and doubling that just impresses me further. World background: 4* This is 4* due to the story still being in its nascent stages. What we have seen so far is pretty standard, but interesting nonetheless. We have the growing village, the nearby biomes and other villages leading to a few larger towns, and then a capital city further away with currently unknown expanses on the way. Politically, we know of the crown and the larger families plus a small insight into some of their allies and enemies. At the moment, the monsters are quite underdeveloped background-wise, to the point some readers questioned the morality of killing them, but I at least trust the author has a plan in this aspect. Overall, great read, and I recommend it so far if this genre is your sort of thing. I will try to answer any questions people may have if I see them, and sorry if my review seems too surface-level; in actuality I'm mainly doing this to get to 10 reviews for level for of the comment badge.

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I enjoy when a story isn't rushed and when it's well written, and these certainly apply to this story. It is eloquently worded and it spends much time on describing the interactions between characters as well as the thoughts of the main character. These are both the book's greatest strenths and weaknesses in my opinion. To illustrate this I will write two lines essentially describing the same thing: -"He could not help but allow the lurking smile at the back of his mind grow on his face as he expressed the feeling his thoughts gave him" -"He smiled at the thought" I enjoy these lengthy descriptions... but not when the book is full of them. Most of the descriptions are like the first option, and I got tired of it pretty quickly. The phrase "could not help but" is also unnecessarily abused to an almost hilarious degree. While I certainly cannot fault the author on their english, I wish they would consider the time to use these dragged out ways to say things that could be short and concise. Which brings me to my second point, the pacing. Dear lord is the pacing slow, which I also enjoy at times, but only if we get some action in between. Those who have read the book may be thinking "wasn't the monster wave enough action?" and to that I say, it should have been half as lengthy and have more fighting rather than pointless dialogue. Also, the monsters are literally only described as that, 'monsters'. Nothing is said about how the regular monsters look in the first couple of chapters of the fight. I'd say, give the book a chance, those of the same opinion as me regarding pacing and language will quickly realize it isn't for them, and for the less picky, I believe you will enjoy it. It certainly isn't bad by any means, but I will not be reading more than 60 chapters of it. Hope you can take some of the criticism to heart and improve author, flaws aside I think you have a good story in you.

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