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No idea.
Would have preferred if the mission took set already but I don't mind this chapter either.
Even though the novel is still in its early stages, I've been enjoying it. The main character is relatable rather than the stereotypical cold, gloomy type, which is refreshing. While the story is still in its early stages, it appears the author intends to expand the Dragon Ball universe with new topics. The speech flows naturally, and the grammar is impeccable. Regular updates are a good indication, and I'm looking forward to more.
Has this story been dropped? If not when will you update this story ?
The fight was well written. Good work.
Is your friend writing this story ? It's decent first chapter.
Nice first chapter. Well done.
Thanks for the chapter.
Thanks for the chapter.