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It's not bad. The writing quality is this fic's most prominent feature, there are little to no visible spelling mistakes, the details are extensive and give you a clear sense of what's happening in and around the MC and the chapters each have a sense of plot progression that's fast but slow enough not to give you whiplash. As for everything else, it's not bad. Chapters are long but filled with a shot ton of buzzwords meaning you get to read a lot about the characters doing very little. The story development has some twists and turns that are surprising but not very interesting. (Seriously, who gives a fuck about lord slug of all people.) The character design is just about as good as the writing quality but damn if it isn't long and unnecessary. Overall it's pretty good, a hell of a lot better than a lot of fan works on this site but I do have one issue with it and it has more to do with the Author than the story. No offense to the author but it feels he seems to enjoy jerking himself off about how good his fic is and how bad everyone else's is but doesn't seem to understand that switching between two extremes doesn't make a fic good. You could legit remove a quarter of each chapter and you still get the point across while creating an immersive world. Not every action taken or word spoken needs a sentence or two after it explaining the intricacies of said action. Sometimes things are simple and can remain as such without lowering the overall quality of the fic.
Which comic are you talking about? Because in most of them, Hawkman is a Thanagarian just like Shayera and they come with wings.
This without a shadow of a doubt the most retarded piece of "literature" that I have ever laid my eyes on. I couldn't even fathom the kind of madness that can come up with something this fucking stupid. It's like a god of all things asinine came down from his throne of stupidity and blessed the autistic fuck who created this with the ability to creep me the fuck out. 5 stars.