Trigger_Black
An aspiring novelist!
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the skills seem a little ....
become stronger, not strong
your progress is to fast bro, give a little detail use a show not tell method
it is too rush, slow it down, define the events more.
I'm Donald Hart from Facebook
should it be grandmaster
Hahaha! After many YouTube videos and constantly reviewing my work, I'd like to think I've done a pretty job at this! And I'd like to tell everyone that FALLEN is not my main work, you could think of it as serving the purpose testing the waters... So please read ASCENSION when it comes out! And please do read my other upcoming series, MADNESS. When it comes out!
what do you mean without Solus?
Rimuru did...