The stronger he got, the more he lost his emotions. When he met the woman and her daughter he was still very weak, however, now, he has obtained a lot of power, therefore he has way less sympathy and care for human life.

Yep, however, if his actions were caught on camera, then, it would be a very long day attempting to compel everyone before they have him in a cage on the way to a lab.

Not enough power stones. Also people are dropping the book because they're too soft.

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His an alpha and Silver doesn't have the full strength of a vampire lord

He forgot.

Because it healed.

Because, a true villain doesn't care about anything or at least, will go to the lowest of lowest levels. My mc however wont. He has limits, killing children just isn't one of em.

This isn't an anime so, no.

So you can get to 15K words.

So? Do you think they would just let him kill Allison then? Of course not. They will still 100% shoot at him.

Ohhh. Yes, that's true, however, if it came to that, he can just compel them to forget. As for the argents or other hunters; if they got too close to finding out his identity he would just kill them.

Huh?

Thanks! I already knew that he wouldn't die that quickly from getting pierced with the stick, however, at the time I was writing this, I was getting bored and decided to just rush thigs. But, in the future I will take my time to make scenes like this more realistic.

Thanks for the tip! As for your second tip, I think it's a little late for that.

I guess it's not everyone cup of tea.

It's only because of the child. If the woman had been alone, he would have killed her.

Gotta find some way to make my mc come off as evil.

Maybe, maybe not; it all depends on whether or not people are willing to give me advice on my writing. If they do, then I'll make sure to finish this book.

His running at full speed.