Sirius459
Hi New Author Here ^_^ I'm Enjoying Writting Fantasy So Feel Free to Read My Works Feel Free to Contact Me on Discord: NoobMaster69#3853
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Thanks For Your Review, First Off All Yes, it is a system genre but I don't want to more focus about the level, the skill, i want more the story focus about the fantasy like the dungeon, the monsters, how the main character trying understand his system slowly. Bcause the secret of the system is inside the dungeon.
Bcause when the time he reach floor 50, Alicia who was trying to back to outside world, Alicia saw Axel fighting with the Razorback Troll on floor 50 bcause that's the only way to her to reach bottom floor.
Nope, Axel Went go to floor 49 he trying to reach Rising Phoenix guild who was on expedition to floor 60
Nope i don't want make my character immediately become strong or too OP, i want emphasis create my character have development, having feeling fail again and again, lost something precious and overcome all of his weaknesses. PS: Thanks you for giving my book a review and i hope you enjoyed this little adventure.
After i read all the chapter i came with the conclusion about this story. First of all the dialog need some improvement it's not like reading a novel but feels like a movie script the world building you create was really nice and i enjoyed reading it so overall yeah this is a good story but need some improvement on the dialog.
well at least you got reincarnated dude
ooh a dragon sword