Review Detail of jnjones73 in I'm Just Level 1

**all this that's about to be said, im still going to save the story and hope the Author revamps so I can read it all over again** The author gave a Quest system, but then went in a completely different route. skipping levels, and key information. the story has potential, but go back and add some chapters between levels 5-10 and then 10-20 give info on the parts you started explaining. it will make the introduction of skills more understandable. Lastly, who is the character, family, age, and his name should be told in a better way then a random whisper.