Another weak trash MC 🤣😂 here we go baby..... LET'S GO. Those author never disappoints me. Always consistent in their story's.,🤭🤭🤭

He can but he was just being nice to Kakashi asking for his permission. you know since he is the creator of this jutsu.

I have to say this 3-foot alpha male with microdick that could measure in millimeters, Knows his stuff I guess, he must have personally experienced it.

TOXIC means being like you. That's what toxic is, get it. If you don't know how to google, which by the way even a 9-year-old could do nowadays. I write down that word's meaning for you. Check it

What the fuck is your point? It's written right there, blind guy can't see much wait is it too high for you.

IF YOU FUCKING TRAP WANT A GOOD STORY WITH A FUCKING PERFECT GRAMMAR. GO FUCKING SUCK YOUR GRANNY SAGGY TIT. I TOLD IN MY SYNOPSIS. THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC. MANY PEOPLE WRITE FANFIC HERE TO IMPROVE, TO LEARN, TO SHARE. I HAVE SEEN MANY PEOPLE MAKE WORSE ATTEMPTS THAN ME. FOR EXAMPLE LIKE YOU. WHAT WAS THE TITLE NAME? HO, GARA IN THE SAND. WORST GRAMMAR SEEN HANDS DOWN. IT'S LIKE SOMEONE WROTE THIS SHIT WITH THEIR ASS CHEEK. NO PUNCTUATION MARKS, NO COMMAS. A BOY NOW THIS HAS BECOME SO EMBARRASSING. THE SYNOPSIS LIKE LOOK SOMEONE MADE IT BY SMASHING A FEW BUTTONS AND IT DOESN'T EVEN HAVE A CHAPTER HAHAHAHAH. THE SHITTY FANFIC BARELY CONTAINS NO MORE THAN 500 WORDS WITH NO COMMENT AT ALL. NOT EVEN A THANK YOU FROM A READER. OR THAT SMALL SMILE EMOJI YOU KNOW THAT READER GIVES. WHEN THEY ARE TOO LAZY TO COMMENT, YEAH NOT EVEN THAT HAHAHA. HEY GUY WITH WHATEVER NAME MAYBE NEXT YOU SAY SOMETHING MAKE SURE TO LOOK AT MIRROR. AND BY THE IF PEOPLE SUDDENLY COMMENT OR LIKE IN THAT SHITTY FANFIC. AFTER I WROTE THIS COMMENT. YOU OWN ME BITCH. YOU UNDERSTAND !

Fucking says the guy with a circumcised dick that's about a millimeter dick. My story was hard to understand. when it was first published but it has made decent progress. Now, I hardly get those problems and you. my bitch comes here telling me my story is so unreadable and I stole the synopsis. Are you a kid? did your mama drop you on your head when you were a kid huh? She Must have been shocked seeing no dick down there ah Boy. This is my FIRST WORK and I'm writing this in my SECOND LANGUAGE. I have improved my grammar since those reviews down there. those were given when I had posted my fanfic without any revision or my previous improvement but I still didn't delete those reviews down because I was happy, I even got a review. I thought those people were right. The time I had published those chapters was bad.

Thanks for commenting

Gatoh has connections and money that's why I chose him. Mc isn't necessarily going to send to gatoh to fight. he is useful as a businessman and that's about it. he is an expendable person. how did Mc have the Coca-Cola formula? Dude coca-cola formula isn't that secret that's locked up in the pentagon vault Ok. The formula of coca-cola ingredient is in it's bottle. If you want to know, how to make it. it's just one click away in google search. Mc has perfect memory which means Ai can record everything he sees or extract memory from his past. The intention of bringing haku was made by viewer. They want r18 so, I said ok fine.! Let's bring her to Konoha.

Then, good bye O_W_L

Really hated this kind of stuff.

I need to look at this. my memories aren't perfect so, just have missed out on this part while researching, thanks man.

do you hate long chapters? I thought people love longer chapters, you know more content.

Due, to the viewer's decision I changed it. This happened so recently that I forgot to put the AU tag. Sorry for the inconvenience, customer.

yeah, I was about to reveal his chakra reserve before the chunin exam.

It is supposed to be 'Ghosts' humans do stupid stuff because they want to be it out of greed, jealousy, pride, and whatever you feel at the time.

You know, what I'm not gonna even answer this.

I get that now redoing it just makes no sense. I went too deep into this abyss, but don't worry Ai's function is primarily to give support and Ai doesn't necessarily play a huge role in the story.

yeah, obviously but ai takes it to another level that's what I was going for in the story.

Really was it that confusing Ok, I will try to change it into '' instead of () in the next chapter. Thanks for commenting.