You all gotta help me, when mever I try to next the MC I find a way to make him more OP, what should I add as a nerf

You're keeping a better updating stability than I would be able to do this year, hoping next year I'm free to update quickly

I won't be available a lot during the corse of the year, the story isn't dropped, I just won't be able to update frequently

I'm not very good at brainstorming when half asleep, so might pick this up, when I am fully awake and free

So in other words, you want a god for Dracula to absorb, maybe have him ho through the Norse and Greek mythologies, or if you want to be original, you could have a god of 'light holes', a god of 'time', a god of 'planets', etcetera

Could make the character resemble some one the MC is comfortable with, and the person pops up from time to time to explain things and comment on what MC is doing. Kinda like Lucifer in SM

The story reminds me of my first stories, fast paced. I like that but some people don't like fast paced story, I'm not saying make it long, but if you could find a way to stay on a point, like explaining the scenery, extra details etc

I won't, this is the only story that cured my curse

I actually like this story, as an extra take my five star review

How about we read each others books

Eyy, another newbie author, and you commented on your book, the way I did mine

I'm a rookie writer, so if you don't like my work, just say it instead of stereotyping it, I have my way of making you like genres you hate after all

Author's comment You can criticize me it'll help me greatly so please do if you find a reason to