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hi! So I managed to find your story after watching your chosen reaction vid and I love the opening premise! Bless you brother! The only thing I'd add is if perhaps you could add some more sensory language and more imagery to make it more immersing? For example, "In the depths of a very cold and dark place, the darkness against my skin feels like a heavy blanket. Suffocating and squashing any hint of light. Its chilling darkness seeps into my very bones, settling in with an icy grip." A line like this can draw more readers in and it sets the setting. You're free to use this by the way! Anyways, I love the story you're going for! Keep up the good work!!
english is not englishing in the descriptions
YESSIR~
Yes. It is. I think it is. Cuz I'm one of em.
Sounds like Naruto. Minus the crushed soda cans.
The mom is...a Karen?
Ambiverts and Introverts alike. Arise.
me four 😂✋
Rapists alert! I know why big brother Chris webt full on rage mode! SAVE BELLA!
Damn! He broke the fucking table with his failed backflip and poor person 😂😂🤣🤣
Can't find any buff gifs of him
My man Arnold is buff 💪~ His body legit looks like real life Baki.
You know when he said this I thought he was being sarcastic till I saw 'Well this body does.' So I'm like ok. He sarcastic yet he ain't being sarcastic. Ok. I get you bro.
I like OC Bella more then OG Bella because OG Bella I kinda of ✨AnNoYiNg✨
highlights??