LazzyD

MOAR please

As much as I can see the story having potential. You’re investing too much time into side characters and world building that’ll last a short duration. This story is going on a tangent on meaningless side stories. I’d be willing to bet the views on your story have dropped since the last three chapters. Not to be mean but just a bit of criticism, know what draws the readers in for this story, it is the allure of having Gojo powers in one piece. It is not about the world that you wish to add on for one piece. The world building is already done and prebuilt for you. You need to focus more on the character you have built to roam this world of your choosing.

I NEED MOAR

MOAR I NEED MOAR

Pretty sure it depends on the complexity of the technique. For limitless neutral and amplified it takes four spins total. I assume it’s more for the reversal red. I assume simple techniques like Blood Manipulation would take less.

MORE MORE MORE I NEED MOAR

more I need more

Where’s the ship with Adrigal? Why is only Medusa getting action?

Bruh, where’s the rest of this fic?

No paragraphing at all. One giant pain to read very inconvenient.