Just make him interested in the world, not like Write the storyline he doesn't want to be a part of. It just makes it frustrating to read.

just do what you want and let us critique and you revised it later.

I just remembered a fanfic that I stopped reading because it just explains every reaction of side character to make a longer chapter. dude, it's annoying.

here

hayz

God luck and get will soon

don't worry, we have read your past work and gotta say. it's fun

waiting to read it soon goodluck

April 2,2024, 10:37 A.M, Philippines. Welp, that's a wrap. I hope to see your next work here

+1

Too Dramatic. Why don't you just write a korean drama Manhwa fanfic it might sound better than reading these cringy lines.

I just hate this kind of author always ending their chapter early and giving us cliffhanger.

and don't tell me his dream to be no.1 hero it just becomes a generic MHA fanfic formula.

the MC has too much positive energy. I mean, he always see the bright side of people around him. Like how he see it's not almighty fault or how he wants to see his bakugo relationship moving forward. He is too "optimistic" if I'm not wrong on my understanding. Why don't you highlight a sin trait on him to make him more human. Like showing greed for power, lust for woman, envy for the strong, or even just being slothful just to show that he is not just a written character that followed a script written. I hope you see this.

It's good, but it is written by following a formula. It's too predictable that it gets boring the far you read it. Why don't you give some spice on it, like give your MC some attitude or stop describing the character in depth but just the broad idea on who he is. It's just a suggestion. I hope you will not get upset with what I said. Like I said It's good but needs just some spice on it.

FINALLY !!! SOMEBODY ADMIT IT!!!

no strong plot. it's just a guy inserted and doing what he wants. but it's good enough if you want some change. I enjoy it, by the way ( ignore my grammar, I'm too lazy to edit it)

he will become the "Dragon Warrior"

MTL hayz thanks