Dearest_Violet

Hello, passerby here, Wow this was a surprise, an extraordinarily gripping chapter 1, well written and sharp imagery. The quality of the writing doesn't let up either, its truly a marvelous work. I do have a few nitpicks though as I always do: the tone slows down quite a bit during chapter two, which is to be expected, but I believe in a writing style like this should keep up the momentum, after all you really had it going there. The paragraphs are quite long for isekai/reincarnation stuff I usually read, which isn't a bad thing but can slow down the reading a bit much, so far, the writing has been good enough that it doesn't matter but do keep this in mind. Overall, quite a surprise! A real gem in the rough here, give it a whirl folks it won't disappoint.

Hello Passerby Here, A good start from the novelist. The author is quite good at keeping flow smooth and not getting stuck on too many details, keeping the reader interested in the process. Punctuation and strange adjectives do take away from the experience. Also the mc doesn't seem quite likable on first glance. I hope this goes well.

From Vermont? No way...

Thank you so much for the kind words. Please check out the next chapter when you have the time, the title may be familiar to you.

Wait you can write multiple of these? No way Definitely not abusing this, Oh okay, so it does actually cap out at 4 max per person... but why 4?

Wait you can write multiple of these? No way Definitely not abusing this, No siree. To be honest I'm just testing if this would actually change anything.

Wait you can write multiple of these? No way Definitely not abusing this, No siree. To be honest I'm just testing if this would actually change anything.

Definitely not the author and definitely not bias trust me. On a side note I'm pretty sure this is at least half way to decent for an isekai, should be interesting if you give it a shot.

Hello passerby here, Ah, it sure has been a long time since a good fashioned dark romance. This one in particular is excellently written and brings me back. Its main lead is also very interesting unlike many that I have read so far. A few nitpicks: 1. You mentioned that Jackson was an Angel I believe yet he somehow lost an emancipated vampire in the woods, it was a bit strange to me. If there was a description of maybe her 'unnatural speed' or his furious but ultimately vain search efforts, it would have left me a little less confused. 2. That play list in the authors comments is quite enticing but unfortunately, I can't copy and paste any words on webnovel for some reason, woe is me. Overall, extremely well done, the writing emphasizes the mood and quite expertly portrays just enough description as to not hinder the flow. Give this one a shot folks!

He seems nice.