Review Detail of Dearest_Violet in Heroes to Hunted

Hello, passerby here, Wow this was a surprise, an extraordinarily gripping chapter 1, well written and sharp imagery. The quality of the writing doesn't let up either, its truly a marvelous work. I do have a few nitpicks though as I always do: the tone slows down quite a bit during chapter two, which is to be expected, but I believe in a writing style like this should keep up the momentum, after all you really had it going there. The paragraphs are quite long for isekai/reincarnation stuff I usually read, which isn't a bad thing but can slow down the reading a bit much, so far, the writing has been good enough that it doesn't matter but do keep this in mind. Overall, quite a surprise! A real gem in the rough here, give it a whirl folks it won't disappoint.