The story may slow down from here idk

I never was able to get into this genre of story, but i found the plot and characters very engaging. Your writing style is interesting and I've yet to find any pace stumping grammatical errors. A great read!

Much more is coming soon!!

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More chapters soon!

How dare I Forget the bacon... i will surely find a place for it in the upcoming chapters

Keep on reading!

Thanks for your time and thoughts, I was just wondering what you think my characters are missing? Is there anything in specific you think I should inflate them with??? Thank you again for your critique!

Also don’t stop improving!

Found this book and have a facsination with the characters and story... Writing and grammer could use some work including the flow of paragraph structure, but i hope you continue working on it and eventually get to a point where you have a Real following!!! Good luck And keep writing

New Chapters coming soon!

I found your writing engaging and very well described, Although I didn't feel personally attached to your characters I loved the story and creativity put into the story!

agreed

Really miss this story! Please bring back The characters were addicting and the story was fantastic! I really wait for more! Thank you AUTHOR

Thank you for taking the time to read and review the Book! What confusion did you have with the prologue? Is there anything I can fix?

Umm... Thanks for the... Kind words(?)

I forgot to mention, the story is thought out and thoroughly fleshed out. A great plot so far!!

The story seems quite interesting, but the characters are hard to understand and feel as the writing could use some better editing. Grammar and spelling mistakes are apparent throughout. However, if the chapters were re-edited the character's personalities would definitely shine through! Please keep updating!

I understand the confusion and disorganization that can arise from the way I presented the prologue. I write in sub-chapters rather than a single long chapter, so there is only one prologue which is divided into 7 sub-chapters. Sorry for the confusion... I made a comment under the first Sub-chapter! thank you for letting me know!

Shameless Plug - Thank you for checking out my story, I hope to continue this and won't be dropping it no matter what! This story has been brewing for a while and I just want to get it out there for people to see, as I think all stories should be! Thank you again and I hope you enjoy it!