Review Detail of Hendinklette in The Bet

Item: The Bet
Rating: 3.6

Detalhe da revisão

HendinkletteLv23yrHendinklette

The story seems quite interesting, but the characters are hard to understand and feel as the writing could use some better editing. Grammar and spelling mistakes are apparent throughout. However, if the chapters were re-edited the character's personalities would definitely shine through! Please keep updating!

The Bet

Jo_J

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Respostas2

HendinkletteLv2Hendinklette

I forgot to mention, the story is thought out and thoroughly fleshed out. A great plot so far!!

3yr

Jo_JAutorJo_J

That's my first story in English, which is not my mother tongue. As I metioned already somewhere - I am using three languages on my phone, Ipad and laptop so my dictionaries are getting crazy... ;) Thanks for the comments.

3yr