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Kenai12_6hComentouThank you for the chapter 🙏
First Hunt- Kenai12_1dPostado
Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.
- Kenai12_6dRespondeu a Noiir
In case this isn’t evident by you having no likes on this comment, and 9 on the comment below, you’re dead wrong.
Indeed, I did vow to use my points solely for the class's benefit. However, the definition of 'benefit' is so broad, and spending 500,000 points to save Karuizawa could be justified as such. It's a move that could be seen as an act of kindness, potentially earning the trust of Class D. - Kenai12_11dComentou
Welcome back! Thanks for not dropping 🙏
Chapter 9: Keeping in Touch - Kenai12_12dRespondeu a TheDarkestFragment
Nope, sliver is correct. Silver is completely wrong.
"However, should there be any evidence or witnesses, the narrative might shift," she added, leaving a sliver of possibility open. - Kenai12_30dComentou
Thanks for another chapter glad you’re still going 🙏
Hey guys I'm not dead! Sorry for not posting in a while. I've been busy and my dog had to get surgery(Ate something he shouldn't have… -_- He's a bit of a dumbo). Anyways, I went back and edited and rewrote a few things, so there's that, hope y'all enjoy this chapter go back and reread if you wish. I'll be back soon. - Kenai12_1mthComentou
All will bow before the bringer of corn 👑
Chapter 1 - Rough Start. - Kenai12_1mthComentouCh 49 FROM FRIENDS TO FOES PART 1
- Kenai12_1mthComentou
Liking what’s here already tbh, growth is a progressive thing so I say no need to redo the whole thing
But anyway, let's cut to the chase: what's your opinion guys? Should we keep on trucking with what we've got, or do you need a rewrite? And if it's the latter, what specific changes are we talking about? personally,i really would love to go on with writing but then my view doesn't count without readers as i would be telling myself the story...please do let me know. - Kenai12_1mthComentou
Mine
Magellan, Today I Will Kill You.detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime e quadrinhos · BlackStar_BH - Kenai12_1mthComentouCh 48 A Survivor's Tale and Rebirth!
- Kenai12_1mthComentouCh 29 {Seeing Stars Pt-1}
- Kenai12_1mthComentou
LEEEEEEETSSSSS GOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
{Seeing Stars Pt-1} - Kenai12_1mthComentouCh 28 {Meal}
- Kenai12_1mthComentouCh 21 The Red Death
- Kenai12_2mthRespondeu a SIeepyDreamerr
My B 👍
Azula's eyes then gleamed with curiosity as she posed another question. "So, how did you manipulate the earth? It was lava bending right? But isn't that an earth sub-bending skill? Or perhaps you heated the ground below you to such a high degree that it turned into lava? But manipulating lava, even as a firebender, hasn't ever been heard of..." - Kenai12_2mthComentou
There was no lava benders or metal benders until Toph expanded earth bending though.
Azula's eyes then gleamed with curiosity as she posed another question. "So, how did you manipulate the earth? It was lava bending right? But isn't that an earth sub-bending skill? Or perhaps you heated the ground below you to such a high degree that it turned into lava? But manipulating lava, even as a firebender, hasn't ever been heard of..."