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Shira_ori

Shira_ori

Lv14

Just a depressed weeb.

2020-05-13 UnidoGlobal
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori9h
    Respondeu a Raj_Shah_7152

    I am no longer going to argue with you but just so you know case one is the exact same issue as the example I showed in the screenshot. You clearly can’t be bothered to at least update the description of the ability to make it work how you want it to (in chapter nine) so I’ll leave you to it and spend my money elsewhere.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori9h
    Respondeu a Raj_Shah_7152

    Yes but in this particular instance the one that I specifically mentioned and showed in the screenshot, the mc was 20 levels lower than cervantez and cervantez was not the second ranked player but the first. Also if you’re ability works like that then do in fact have to change the description In chapter nine. I feel it is you who is not understanding me.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori10h
    Respondeu a Raj_Shah_7152

    You said that if his level is higher than the second ranked it would display his true level but in this example the second ranked player was the mc +10 would have made the mc level 100 it wouldn’t have made him level 110 because Cervantez was not the second ranked player he was first ranked.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori10h
    Respondeu a Raj_Shah_7152

    It is still a wrong use of the ability

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori10h
    Respondeu a Raj_Shah_7152

    This is you replying to me catching you using the ability wrong telling me that I misunderstood even though now you’re telling that I’m wrong even though you apparently think you’re using the ability as you wrote it in chapter nine (which you aren’t in this example, i think you did this to force the plot and hoped that no-one would catch on)

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori10h
    Respondeu a Raj_Shah_7152

    This image is me catching you using the ability wrong. Cervantez at this point in time was the first ranked player so his ability making him 10 levels higher than Cervantez makes no sense.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori10h
    Respondeu a Raj_Shah_7152

    I’ll separate my reply into three pieces as I can only put one image per reply, this image is a deleted reply.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori11h
    Respondeu a Raj_Shah_7152

    You deleted whatever reply you left before so as far as I know you just realised I was right and decided you didn’t want to engage in a losing argument anymore, if you really want your level ability to work the way you’ve made it then you need to change the description of it in chapter nine, also I’m not the only person finding and pointing out mistakes (that you aren’t editing) and plot holes.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori12h
    Postado

    (Chapter 223) Overall it’s an ok read just full of plot holes written by an author who consistently forgets what they wrote in the past so that they can force the plot forward or create unnecessary drama, the mc seems to have not grown at all going from acting calm and collected to an irrational teenager having a temper tantrum, I gave it a good try but in the end just got fed up and would rather not continue to spend my money on this.

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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori12h
    Comentou

    Why doesn’t he see if he can use mp to change his Id

    "Leo Skyshard, really? Might as well have named myself 'Please Rob Me DAILY' What's next? A gaming ID named Leo Skyshard is the boss?" Leo wondered, as he felt extremely dumb about even typing in his name on the keyboard.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori12h
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    Why didn’t you just do Jin mu? He’s already told his brother that his id is Jin mu you’re just making more unnecessary problems author.

    [ System Notification - Congratulations Player 'Leo Skyshard', your second ID name has been successfully registered. Please enjoy gaming with your new identity~ ]
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori12h
    Comentou

    What a stupid excuse

    "Fine, if you must, then after entering first for a few minutes, I was trying to change into my usual clothes, however, these damn golden buttons were too hard to open.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori12h
    Respondeu a ShiveRr

    Just another plot hole for the ever growing pile

    With trembling hands, the maid opened the lock to Leo's door, as Dom and the Captain headed into the room.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori15h
    Comentou
    Branded as a rebel and a Messiah of the poor, Leo was gaining unprecedented popularity as the commoners became idolizing him and what he stood for.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori16h
    Respondeu a Raj_Shah_7152

    Why don’t you edit it then

    "My Lord, you must listen to our plea. The Boss is not a morally upright citizen. He's a barbaric monster who has brutally injured one of the Knight and Mage Academy's brightest prospects while also going on to kill another candidate in the round of 32.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori16h
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    That’s got to be a disqualification

    Ten daggers that would have otherwise been planted into Tor's backframe, missed their marks because of the crowd warning as Tor rolled around in the mud below to try to regain his footing.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori20h
    Comentou

    But if you did beat him it wouldn’t show superiority it would just show that you won with a extremely clear advantage and if he showed even a semblance of skill on this terrain then it would show that in a fair fight you would be unlikely to win.

    Now was her chance to pay that faith back, as adorning the DarkSky guild robes, she wanted to beat The Boss in this round and send an emphatic statement to the masses about how superior their guild was, having even beat the number one player in the very first round.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori1d
    Respondeu a The_shoker

    He can’t it’s done with space tech

    They could have probably gotten together enough MP to buy an A class ticket for their mother, should she be the lone passenger, however, now between buying two tickets and her safety, the brother's would need to work hard to even secure two C class ones.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori1d
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    Just buy your mother’s ticket and security, I doubt the aliens will care if she doesn’t want to go they’ll probably just take her and if you dad tries to stop them he’ll probably be killed it’s a win win

    Our father is dead to me, I'm sticking with that story forever" Leo said, looking straight into Luke's eyes with hatred burning within them.
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  • Shira_ori
    Shira_ori2d
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    I’ll comment here so you, the author, can read the description of the ability as you wrote because you have definitely forgotten that you wrote this.

    When the game officially opens and more than a 10,000 players reach level10, a levelling leader board will open and the inheritor of this class will be displayed to be 10 levels above the number2 ranked player even if that is not the reality. 
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