Shira_ori
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I am no longer going to argue with you but just so you know case one is the exact same issue as the example I showed in the screenshot. You clearly can’t be bothered to at least update the description of the ability to make it work how you want it to (in chapter nine) so I’ll leave you to it and spend my money elsewhere.
Yes but in this particular instance the one that I specifically mentioned and showed in the screenshot, the mc was 20 levels lower than cervantez and cervantez was not the second ranked player but the first. Also if you’re ability works like that then do in fact have to change the description In chapter nine. I feel it is you who is not understanding me.
This is you replying to me catching you using the ability wrong telling me that I misunderstood even though now you’re telling that I’m wrong even though you apparently think you’re using the ability as you wrote it in chapter nine (which you aren’t in this example, i think you did this to force the plot and hoped that no-one would catch on)
You deleted whatever reply you left before so as far as I know you just realised I was right and decided you didn’t want to engage in a losing argument anymore, if you really want your level ability to work the way you’ve made it then you need to change the description of it in chapter nine, also I’m not the only person finding and pointing out mistakes (that you aren’t editing) and plot holes.
(Chapter 223) Overall it’s an ok read just full of plot holes written by an author who consistently forgets what they wrote in the past so that they can force the plot forward or create unnecessary drama, the mc seems to have not grown at all going from acting calm and collected to an irrational teenager having a temper tantrum, I gave it a good try but in the end just got fed up and would rather not continue to spend my money on this.
Why doesn’t he see if he can use mp to change his Id
Why didn’t you just do Jin mu? He’s already told his brother that his id is Jin mu you’re just making more unnecessary problems author.
What a stupid excuse
Just another plot hole for the ever growing pile
Why don’t you edit it then
That’s got to be a disqualification
But if you did beat him it wouldn’t show superiority it would just show that you won with a extremely clear advantage and if he showed even a semblance of skill on this terrain then it would show that in a fair fight you would be unlikely to win.
He can’t it’s done with space tech
Just buy your mother’s ticket and security, I doubt the aliens will care if she doesn’t want to go they’ll probably just take her and if you dad tries to stop them he’ll probably be killed it’s a win win
I’ll comment here so you, the author, can read the description of the ability as you wrote because you have definitely forgotten that you wrote this.