Cozma
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nutation - a periodic variation in the inclination of the axis of a rotating object. or - the circular swaying movement of the tip of a growing shoot.no need to change words just cause u can't keep your mind off things
hurt*
small ones were 30cm tall and 1m across, the queen is 5 times bigger than a small one. i think it was like this
Something like that to be honest 🤣
You'll see ;)
oof, self roast, those are rare
nice
I have to say this first. The story is magnificent and I like the way you thought about building the world, the different types of ruling over different countries. I never saw someone use the Zodiac in building their world which is something special. Now the flaws. The writing is unsavory and that is the only thing that pulls down your novel. I hope that you will visit your novel from the beginning chapters and fix it. Otherwise, it would be 5/5 stars.
The story is good, it gives strong, really power emotions from the first chapters. I enjoyed the first chapter(as of now) and the idea of the story and the potential of it is literally immense, but in that aspect it will come down to the author. The MC Lily even though you couldn't say that you feel related to her, not being able to see colors is a hard thing to do, you can feel the fact that she has been through a lot so far. The society around her treated bad, as though she wasn't also a human. I hope to see more chapters.
Daaamn he should shut his trap now!