Review Detail of Cozma in Spider lily

I have to say this first. The story is magnificent and I like the way you thought about building the world, the different types of ruling over different countries. I never saw someone use the Zodiac in building their world which is something special. Now the flaws. The writing is unsavory and that is the only thing that pulls down your novel. I hope that you will visit your novel from the beginning chapters and fix it. Otherwise, it would be 5/5 stars.