brother update the fics

update the batman fic too bro

brother update the Nano Machines fic frl..

are you still alive?

LEGIONNAIRE

not even one gem in this bruh..... all of these are stones...... 2/5 star quality books all of them.

Writing Quality- Really good, very few times do I see confusingly complex compound sentences or incorrect uses of punctuation. Proper grammar and all that jazz. Stability of Updates- He adds like 4 chapters overnight so yeah it's good. Story Development and Character Design- Holy shit this is where the book suffers, We start off with a good beginning; something that'll clue us into how Harry goes dark and evil and yada yada grindelwald but better yada yada. But instead of what we expect we get instead a kid who is so traumatized and so untalented that he literally does not know any otherwise "useful spells" according to chapters 40-45. Like quite literally this guy is so fucking insanely weak mentally, physically and magically that it hurts to read. Most readers (like 5 people of which only 1 comments regularly) keep telling the author that Adrian's too fucking weak and too fucking sappy but the Author does nothing to fix it instead he makes it worse on a chapter-by-chapter basis. The character's are all completely unlike their novel counterparts and the author was unable to grasp their actual nature. The only one who the author got right is Luna Lovegood. Regardless of how horrible the characters are written, and how poor the main character Adrian is at being a protagonist; it's a decent read that I think would serve well as an intermediate story to read if you're transition from normal good guy harry FF's to bad guy harry FF's as it'll definitely make the transition less daunting.

oh ffs why harem in this world of all

Whats even funnier is the book lost 2/3 of its collections after the Harem tag and this Notice LOL

Would've been a good book if there were no fucking harem.Would've been a good book if there were no fucking harem.Would've been a good book if there were no fucking harem.

Why did you delete Reborn Cultivator? It was such a good book and even if it you had a creative block there was no reason behind completely deleting the book

Boring as fuck, Horribly boring. No pull whatsoever..............................................................................................................................

soh on his way to make another fanfic that lasts only 7 chapters.

This could be good, but unfortunately it fucking sucks. The main character acts like he's in fucking One piece, he acts like an even cartoonier retarded Luffy. Low effort, poorly written, poor grammar, 4th grade level vocabulary, and worst of all black MC. Horrifically bad. I'd give 0 if possible.

retard

retard

neither aikido nor systema are real martial arts, you have been decieved by bullshido.

I hate to say it, but this is one of the few Avatar fanfics that just fucking suck. I have no clue how SrCuervo (who is usually pretty goated) fucked up almost everything. I can go into details but that requires me being somewhat invested in the book which I'm not. Just know it's shit

Any Updates Author?

Author could you update this masterpiece