Review Detail of Slyyle in The Chosen one who goes dark

Writing Quality- Really good, very few times do I see confusingly complex compound sentences or incorrect uses of punctuation. Proper grammar and all that jazz. Stability of Updates- He adds like 4 chapters overnight so yeah it's good. Story Development and Character Design- Holy shit this is where the book suffers, We start off with a good beginning; something that'll clue us into how Harry goes dark and evil and yada yada grindelwald but better yada yada. But instead of what we expect we get instead a kid who is so traumatized and so untalented that he literally does not know any otherwise "useful spells" according to chapters 40-45. Like quite literally this guy is so fucking insanely weak mentally, physically and magically that it hurts to read. Most readers (like 5 people of which only 1 comments regularly) keep telling the author that Adrian's too fucking weak and too fucking sappy but the Author does nothing to fix it instead he makes it worse on a chapter-by-chapter basis. The character's are all completely unlike their novel counterparts and the author was unable to grasp their actual nature. The only one who the author got right is Luna Lovegood. Regardless of how horrible the characters are written, and how poor the main character Adrian is at being a protagonist; it's a decent read that I think would serve well as an intermediate story to read if you're transition from normal good guy harry FF's to bad guy harry FF's as it'll definitely make the transition less daunting.