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Confident and always adapting. Only what is necessary will happen nothing more nothing less
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Seemingly wrong, but approximately 1.3 million earths can fit into our sun.
Your bonus chapter is out and the solo journey ended a couple chapters back.
Thanks for the review and support. Also, the first part was heavily focused on the main character going compeltely solo, mastering everything he could get his hands, preparing for the worst, and becoming more powerful. Thus, the Solo Arc. If you think about it, if you truly went solo compeltley focused on being low-key and powering up in Marvel. Then it would just be you, your actions, and your thoughts. I tried to make it as enjoyable as possible while keeping it realistic. However, your timing is quite perfect as the solo arc is coming to an end, and you're about to get exactly what you desire. Dialogue. Hope I see you there, as I look forward to your future critique. +1 Bonus chapter (that's a total of three bonus chapters for this week now. Keep the love coming). . . . Until the next sun🌅
He is far more powerful now. As for manipulating reality, who says he can't? The only thing weak is his new body simply because he made it limitless and unlocked all his lineages. His true form now could insta kill the him before. *Just an example, but...* The MC simply chose to be a baby that can become one above all instead of creating a body with similar limits and powers as Zeus. Hope this helped. Thanks for commenting and reading. . . . Until the next sun🌅
You probably have a better muscle to fat ratio. This means you have less fat and more muscle than your friend. Muscle is heavier than fat, so you would be heavier. You must be quite strong💪🏾. Sleeper build?
if he is interested**
He's only reading about the engineering process behind weapons. From an engineer point of view, it's worthwhile knowledge. If he isbintrestw in that field, why not get a head start. As for actually making guns, he couldn't even buy certain books without his parents' permission, so they naturally believed he couldn't buy the materials for guns, and they also trusted him. Also... It's America
The abyss is not visible. If it was, you would be extremely spot on. Nice comparison, though.
Descrining it aa "boring" is quite subjective. Nevertheless, you're absolutely right with the lacking dialogue. However, from chapter 19, the MC starts to gain a reasson to exit his solo lifestyle. Aside from dialogue, the fight scenes and training scenes are also more detailed and vivid. Especially the bullet machine moment (let me know if you enjoyed that, as fight scenes, group training, solo training, and such will be written that way). Essentially, the MC is about to step out.
Your absolutely correct. There is very little dialogue. I want to write a story heavily from the mc's point of view. Thus, true to being independent or solo, there is little dialogue. For now. However, keep reading you might notice I did go from tell to show. Thanks for the comment.
Thanks for the review. +1 bonus chapter. Also the story is a fast paced one thus from chapter 1 till the book end. Everything will be fast paced. Since a major point of the story is acheiving results as fast as possible before any type of thanos snap can go off. Also, your right MC has done the bare minimum for identifying the world he is currently in (simce he deemed knowing its marvel is enough to go all out in becoming powerful regardless of which universe). Thus, so far he is basing it off historical events, famous charcters and the level of technology, to knows it's the marvel universe. However to specifically pinpoint which one without a multiversal ability, or advanced tech it would only waste time. Although I am open to suggestions if you know a method I can possibly add it.