Review Detail of Jackleell in Marvel: The Suns Anomaly

Item: Marvel: The Suns Anomaly
Rating: 3

Detalhe da revisão

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I enjoy this story, but it feels more like a diary than a novel. There isn't much interaction; it's like, "I did this and did that. I'm handsome and I'm a god. I will take over the world with my godly powers," etc. sigh this story would have been enjoyable if the chapter are a little longer as well.

Marvel: The Suns Anomaly

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ZenfreeAutorZenfree

I am glad you enjoyed the story. Changes for dialogue have already been made due to reviews with constructive criticism. I can't make changes for: "I don't like the intentional lack of dialogue." "I don't like shorter chapters."

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