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The Villain's Lament

Author: Reveries_
Fantasy Romance
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In a world filled with pain, fear, and prejudice, Eleanor faces accusations and judgment from her former lover Gabriel and his lover Alice. As tensions rise, Eleanor seizes a sword and confronts them, defying their expectations. Gabriel pleads for her to stop, expressing concern, but she remains determined to free herself from oppression. She died, and upon awakening, found herself transported back to the age of fifteen. Determined to alter her destiny, she embarked on a journey of transformation, only to discover that everything she had experienced was built upon deceit, allusion. " so what I live is not real "

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Reveries_
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please let me know what you think 💬🤔 💕 🤔

DRACULAVONDEATH
DRACULAVONDEATHLv13DRACULAVONDEATH

The author wanted a honest review so first things first, there are times then sentences repeats themselves, there were a few Instances then I got confused but the next chaps cleared It up, next are the first person perspective, I also write from first person perspective then It Involves the MC but I never do that from other characters, the first time I got confused then reading from another characters perspective I think It would be better If you wrote whose perspective It Is, then you change perspectives, personally I would have written chap 6 and 7 before Elenore got Into the carriage because as a reader after reading that I chap I already know what happened so reading It again from another characters perspective makes It a bit annoying despite my criticism I can tell that the author Is trying their best so give It a read maybe this book you're cup of tea, P.S. I wasn't trying to degrade the book or anything I just gave an honest review from a readers perspective because the Author asked me to.

Desiray_Mueller
Desiray_MuellerLv14Desiray_Mueller

I Love this book! Let me start off by saying that the emotions the FL was going through, I felt that deep in my soul. It was as if I was her, the pain and bitterness of it all left me feeling alone and so much sorrow for her. That has not happened in awhile. The amount of sadness the author put in the first few chapters were heartbreaking but also astounding because at the same time you can feel her determination to live a better life. A thirst for her to not be controlled. The ML John, has a great depth of layering that’s needs to be addressed. He is going to be a favorite of mine. He is very complexed, he has his own revenge going on but he is helping her the best way he can. The story building is good. I can just imagine the way the buildings look and I have a clear picture of what everyone looks like. I love that there are no grammatical errors. I just dropped a good book because of it. I hope Elenor is going to be very powerful. Stay consistent and read your reviews and engage with your audience and this book will be fabulous. I can’t wait for more chapters.

vervainiasi
vervainiasiLv15vervainiasi

After reading all the available chapters, I can say the author has a good vision and development for this world. It's an interesting story, though the pacing is a bit unstable. We tend to jump from one point to another without ever really concluding anything. We get a breakfast scene with a fight, followed by a kissing scene that was 3 days later? Then a torture interrogation, I'm not sure where exactly it is in the timeline but the torture interrogation is sprinkled throughout. Then some exposition about witches. What is our FL doing? No idea sleeping and sobbing I suppose. She doesn't seem to do much to try and work through her situation. I get the shock, denial, and confusion, but it's been a while and some of the processing should be done. I'm not asking for much just some progress for our FL. I do enjoy the characters although I wish the author would put the descriptions either in the comments or the author's notes since putting them in the chapter just runs up the word count and cost. However, there is a glaring issue with the lack of proofreading before being published. Words are misspelled, characters are misnamed, sentences are repeated, and phrases that are used are clunky. I was considering reporting all of the mistakes but that would honestly take up more time than just reading the novel. I do enjoy the world and mysteries being uncovered.Overall, I am ambivalent about our FL as she seems kind of useless for everything except crying and picking fights. The ML seems interesting, as does the rest of the cast. I look forward to their stories gradually being revealed. I assume this is the authors' first work since there are so many ideas expressed in such a short time, rather than gradually being revealed as their own independent arc. It's a good concept, I just hope for some streamlining, and proofreading in the future. I look forward to what the Author does in the future.

books_n_coffee
books_n_coffeeLv4books_n_coffee

This is one of the most frustrating stories I have ever read. The idea is magnificent and so far (chapter 30) the mystery is unravelling nicely.But... English is obviously not the writer's first language so much praise is due for the ability to express such a complicated plot at all. However writing in the first person for different characters (even with the addition of a name at the beginning of a chapter is not ideal) causes confusion - even to the writer, it seems.There is repetition of descriptions of characters which honestly seems like a ploy to reach the required number of words in a chapter, as well as a "last chapter we read" paragraph at the beginning of a new one, which to be honest is pretty unnecessary.The plot itself is thrilling and confusionary- when the writing echoes it it can be too much. This book would definitely benefit from an editor or proof reader.fingers crossed

Albinus_istamar
Albinus_istamarLv3Albinus_istamar

The most wonderful thing about this reading is that the author conveys that he is in full control of the story, taking it exactly where he had planned and not like many works that are a compendium of recurring improvisation. Good job

divine_fairy
divine_fairyLv1divine_fairy

Nice one keep going . Nice one keep going . Nice one keep going Nice one keep going Nice one keep going . Nice one keep going . Nice one keep going Nice one keep going 17d

JesReadin
JesReadinLv15JesReadin

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ToufiqUlAlam
ToufiqUlAlamLv4ToufiqUlAlam

One word....Amazing. The use of words and expressions... I loved them. The style of narration is also beautiful and some of the lines were absolute gem. Please, finish the story and let us see the end.

Kaniu
KaniuLv1Kaniu

this is a very good book and interesting, I advise everyone to read it, I just started reading it and it shaded me ооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооо

Visionary_M
Visionary_MLv11Visionary_M

This novel has away of grabbing readers attention and holding it. Once you start reading, you'd want to keep going to learn more about what will happen next. Eleanor's journey is captivating since she tries to break free from her present conditions in order to live a better life. If you resonate with this, which I think most people do so, try it and give this novel a read. It might be the novel you were looking for. When it comes to the narrative and the writing quality, this novel doesn't fall behind. The writing was descriptive and unique in its own way. Further, there were little to no grammatical errors thus it boost readers experience. All the best author [img=recommend]

GMSJakers
GMSJakersLv1GMSJakers

The progression of the plot is very neat, and really peaks my interest. The characters are quite engaging as well.

ricebucket0_0
ricebucket0_0Lv13ricebucket0_0

Love how the story slowly unfolds ❤️❤️ Definitely a 5-stars from me. Writing is beautifully done and immersive, characters are realistic with flesh and blood, especially love their names btw. The only thing lacking is the update so hope the author could keep it up!

blackblackblackcat
blackblackblackcatLv1blackblackblackcat

i wonder what will happen she don't like him but she will marry him but he don't like her[img=thinking]

Darkodia
DarkodiaLv1Darkodia

This story weaves a complex tale of emotional turmoil, defiance, and suspense. Eleanor's journey against prejudice and betrayal is both heart-wrenching and thought-provoking. A truly gripping narrative.

Author_Zia
Author_ZiaLv13Author_Zia

The word formation is absolutely good, and this book is very engaging. Brilliantly written by the author from the first chapter, and I couldn't help but want to read more. Thanks Author

HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxLv13HambinoRanx

Really good book so far; character descriptions are lacking a bit however and I would like to see more world building. But the story is still only 7 chapters in so keep it up author

Mystic_Chronicler
Mystic_ChroniclerLv2Mystic_Chronicler

This story takes you on an emotional rollercoaster as Eleanor battles accusations and prejudice. The tension between the characters keeps you engaged, and the unexpected twists in the plot add depth to the narrative. The complex relationships and Eleanor's defiance make for a compelling read. The ending leaves you hanging, eager to know what happens next.

redlady
redladyLv1redlady

The writing style is awesome ..it pulled me in the story easily .I like the FL 's determination to do it herself ....i like her villain side too ...i am waiting for more chapters ! So keep up the good work !

Debaxoid_Prime
Debaxoid_PrimeLv2Debaxoid_Prime

I really like this book. the character design is also good,the story development is also good as well as the world background. I would really prefer it.

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