The Dawn of Heroes

The tense switches back and forth between past and present so I'm not too sure when this is set. Some sentences need re-wording. But the idea is interesting, the character's personality shines through the dialogue and the start created mystery which would push the reader to want to find out more about the story.

Interesting story, its a mixture of sci-fi with fantasy based elements. Well written and i have not seen any grammatical errors so far. Good number of released chapters per week. Definitely worth the read as overtime the world background fleshes out each chapter. Would recommend to any reader out there.

The start of the story was good as reincarnation hints through the dream is not new for me. The black dot on the story is that it has too many intricate details which makes me skip a few lines. Sometimes leaving the readers to their own imagination can lift up your story when you unravel the mystery at the end.

I love how the author explains everything in each chapter. I also like how the author does the reincarnation system through dreams, although I've seen it before, it's not as trashy as the top stories on this platform so that's a plus. I saw some grammatical errors here and there, but we're all human so no biggie. I like how the characters are introduced and I like how it seems to be in an apocalyptic theme. Honestly, this is a great piece of work, you nice keep going!

Well written start. I came up to your 6th chapter and so far I like it very much. Of course, I can't see yet the world development, but I can see his own. A female system is a nice addition. As I came up to the 6th chapter, I love the new character. Not going to give any spoiler. Hhehehehe. Truly well done.

Well done. I like the way the dream/premonition/ reincarnation work on him. Even tho I can see that you started off in as it seems post-apocalyptic era, I am glad how you explain every chapter and every step of his growth. The system is of course my favourite theme. I like that she is female in this case. And what's that with a childhood friend? Or will it be the Lieutenant? ;) Great start. I will check your later growth and review it again [img=recommend]

I just came only to the 6th chapter and like the most... new side character. Sorry. But I have to admit that the way you explain the whole process makes me understand the beginning of a great story. You sat quite a good base for your novel. I promise I will make a review every twenty chapters. So the next one is at ch. 20. Have fun writing it. You are doing a good job so far.

I like the mix of genres! Superpowers and System are practically the same thing, but mix in a little bit of military in there makes it interesting. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but that can easily be improved! The character designs are nice, and the world-building is the best part of it. I haven't read all of the chapters yet, but overall I'm giving it a 4.6. Good luck, author! This looks promising!

The story is still in its eager stages, bit it's clear that the talent and potential is there. It's a shame that there are only four chapters, I was eager to read more. The flow was good, and the characters different enough. My only gripe with it is the tense inconsistency. Overall, one of the most promising works I've readd in a while

I couldn't particularly say a lot because there were only 4 chapters as the problems or climacs hadn't really occur, but i have to say the writing style is really good and the plots are really interesting. I could see the development building up within these chapters. Good work author! keep it up!

I'm looking forward for more chappies. The current events makes me look forward for what will happen next. Why? The flow of the story is good and likeable. I'll add it on my binge list.

Simply great...👏👏👏The beauty of the story enhanced because of your words....👍👍👍You are doing a great work in writing...The voice of words while in the warzone is best....One can actually feel like it....Goosebump...I hope you will be this consistent in wrting. Great storyline...Keep up the good work....Only four chapters so can't say more....👍👍👍

There is only three chapters, so I cannot fully grasp the story. But so far your story is really good and your descriptions leave good imagery. Your grammar is good, so keep that up! Other than that, keep going with the pace you are at and this story will be amazing.

The story is still in progress, but the beginning is executed so smoothly that I was pulled in with interest. I won't give examples because that will be spoiling new reader, so they'll just have to read it themselves. Lol, I don't want to spoil anyone. That'll ruin their experience and the author work. But I would say that the story is very similar to those system-like novels. It's not hard to find these kind of plot. But with that said, I think the author will give readers something unique further on in the story. Something that makes this story different from others. As for grammatical issues, there's not much....lol, author, why are your grammar and punctuation game so on point!!! There's a few sentence that I found to have past and present tense together which is kind of confusing. But other than that, the writing quality is one that I truly envy!!! AUTHOR!! As for the background and character design, well, the world background is obvious pointed out as one could see or read from synopsis. But it does leave a bit of mystery as what kind of apocalypse or danger humans are facing. Zombie? Alien invasion? Mutants, etc. All different kind of danger that could push humanity to extinction. Moving on to the character design, the author did a good job on describing the main character and the others. As these descriptive details gives the reader a better understanding of how they look like and act. In overall, the story is heading toward a great plot. A very descriptive story indeed. Keep up the great work!

Quite the good story you got here, the plot is interresting and your writing is in fact quite good, the only downside would be not having to much chapters (3 as of writing this) but im already looking forward to what's coming next!

The story is still in it's early stages so far but the writing and grammar is good so even if it's a superpower sci-fi setting so far, I have enough faith to know that it will deviate from the normal formula considering the already additional elements.

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