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Supreme General Reborn In Dxd With One Wish.(Verse)

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[Check Out My Original Book* [Resurgence Of The Violet Overlord: Chronicles Of A Shattered World] Thank you if you do. Synopsis: The Supreme General of the Hevsue empire, Eseryt, the most powerful empire on earth was killed in battle after falling into a trap made by the combined countries. He was given top priority over everything else to be killed as he was the Hevsue empire's most powerful soldier even considered its backbone. With power like that of a god borne on earth over 10,000 enemy soldiers fall at his feet every month, they had tried to kill him many times in the past but he always came out on top. It was as though he possessed no weaknesses to speak of. Unfortunately for him he does indeed have one such weakness......his own empire. Sometimes following orders from above without a second thought and often times foregoing to question their loyalty. In this small failure he was set up by some corrupt officials of the empire who though the empire was done for, as all other countries formed an alliance to deal with their own Supreme General. But he knew best not everything ever goes as planned, opportunities exist in everything, even death.... *Alright, story has a system but it doesn't have any real use, it is only used to see statistics nothing else* *Forgot to put, but nothing in this story belongs to me except the Mc and Oc characters Cover photo not mine, if owner wants me to remove it I will.

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Chapter 1×Chapter 1× Supreme General of absolution

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."GO GO GO, TO THE LEFT SHOOT SHOOT DON'T LET HIM REACH US!!!."A soldier on the battlefield shouted to his fellow companions that surrounded him to shoot at a target, it was over 500 of them but they still seemed to be the ones at a disadvantage.

*Boomm*!! *Booomm*!!

The figure that they were shooting at, with seemingly skillful ease dodged every round of gun fire thrown at him, it brought one to think that what he did was a normal occurrence.

But the soldiers seemed to be fearful as they trembled in fear at what they just bared witness to with their own eyes, such a thing shouldn't be possible in this world.

Their weapons had little to no effect on the adversary before them as he was still coming at them non-stop with an ever growing momentum .

.""Hahahahaha, well look what we have here, ya'll prepared a little party for me it seems"".

.""So kind of the WNE alliance to give me a little warm up to stretch my muscles before the fight starts"".

The silhouette laughed as he walked out of the smoke caused by the hail of bullets that struck his surroundings.

He appeared out the dust cloud and into the light, it was a giant of a man by the world's standards, radiating a majestic presence, he was 7 feet tall, dark skinned and held muscles that bulge with strength but also elasticity.

With brown eyes that held a slight amount of crazy genius, even in older age as he looked to be around his 40's-50's he was handsome, at least an 8 out of 10 in the grand scheme of things.

He wore a high ranking military uniform that instead of looking like a soldier he looked like a royal figure, he had stars and medals all over his chest and a royal purple cape on his back blowing in the wind.

On his head layed a hat that represented a general but instead of the stars with a H at the top logo of the Hevsue empire, it had the words SUPREME GENERAL.

This beast of a man was Haile, the Supreme General of the Hevsue empire of the South, one of the four great empires of the world, he was also by himself the most powerful man in the world both in status and personal power.

Right now he was only battling some of the soldiers of the WNE alliance which represented the West, North and East Great empires, it was over 500 of them currently and he was taking them all on and was even winning.

They could even touch him even though he was unarmed and alone, which is sad but understandable, this man before them in just the last 30 years had slaughtered more than 3,000,000 enemies

And within that 3,000,000 was some of the best soldiers the three empires had to offer, they even had to steal soldiers from some smaller countries and train them to add to their already declining power.

Haile smiled as he look at the hundred man army before him, he was a little disappointed at the numbers but he doesn't really care as even a fly has meat even though it's small.

."Alright, what are you all waiting for, come at me, shoot, rip me apart....if you can that is."Haile said still smiling as the army cowered before him some even taking small steps back.

These soldiers were no fools they knew that if they got even an inch close to this maniac they will die without even knowing how, so how can they just willing throw themselves through deaths gates of their own will.

But in the end they really have no choice, either they fight or they die, if they retreated and return home they will be killed, if they fight this monstrosity they will be killed.

They were really struck between four mountains unable to move in any direction, the only path now is below then up, the grave and hopeful heaven.

They clenched their teeth cursing all the generations of the corrupt officials of their respective empires, but they had a mission to do.

Stall the supreme general for a bit till what the higher up wants to do is finished its preparation, even they don't know, their orders were to keep him in the desert for as long as possible.

Haile who was waiting for them to come, suddenly he stiffened up and lost his smile, he turn his head behind him looking to the sky.

Nothing was there but it seemed as if he saw something."So they finally betrayed me huh, bunch of cowards."He muttered under his breath as he looked back at the now pitiful looking soldiers, who didn't know yet that they were also betrayed.

."ALRIGHT MEN, THIS MAY BE IT, OUR LAST STAND, LETS GO OUT WITH A BAN-."What seemed to be the Commander of these soldiers shouted but the last words seemed to be stuck in his throat as a loud whistling sound could be heard from the sky in the distance, he looked and paled.

He looked up in the distance and his face turned white, a dead look appeared in his eyes, the other soldiers also looked up and drop to the ground one by one in lost hope.

."Hahahaaahhhhhhh!!!." ."Ahhhhhhhhh!!!."

All the soldiers except the Commander began to break down mentally, some started to laugh crazily and some just screamed.

The only one in the army with a clear head was the commander, but even he had also given up hope, he looked at Haile who was also looking up with resentment, this was because of this man.

Haile who had regained his smile look across at the commander."Hahahah it seem like you lot were also betrayed along with me, you became the sacrifices to bring me down, by the looks of it they really went all out."He laughed a bit as he said this.

He turn his head back to the sky, in the air black dots numbered in the hundreds were coming to claim his life after 50 years, they were nuclear warheads, weapons of mass destruction, each can destroy a city by themselves.

How he knew he was betrayed, that was easy, if he wasn't betrayed, before these warhead got close to him they would have been intercepted by his empires own warheads, that's how he could still live after killing over three million people of the three empires.

But even in this situation he had regained his smile, even though he knew this was the end of his life, he still felt a little bit excited.

He had conquered everything in this world with his own hands, he had brave the hot of the wilderness, the cold of the north, the mountains, fought off a tiger and killed a whale with a sword.

He had challenged almost every major power that existed on this planet, but there was one thing he was sure he could not beat and that was the power of the nuclear warheads of the empires.

Even though he didn't fear death, he didn't want to just jump right at death doors and open it with his own hands.

But right now the doors were coming at him so he will take this as a chance to see if the pinnacle strength of humanity could withstand the pinnacle of human technology.

He turned toward the warheads not backing down, his cape fluttered in the wind as he grinned even wider, he can finally use his full strength against something.

He walked forward a bit clenching his fist taking a stance to release his full might in one punch as he won't have another.

Seconds go by as the warheads got closer and closer, as they got closer the smile on Haile's face widened and he seemed to be satisfied with life.

Maybe his only regret was that he won't be able to destroy all four empires and that they succeeded in their goal of killing him.

He accepted his fate with his most powerful punch of his lifetime and possibly in all human history....

*BOOOOOOMMMMMM*!!!

Unfortunately for Haile, even with his almost invincible strength his punch didn't put up any resistance at all to the warheads, he, the soldiers, the entire city and 10 million Square miles of destruction followed each other to the afterlife.

It was to be expected that he couldn't win, it was hundreds of warhead against him, as powerful as he was he was only mortal.

So today on the 23nd of August 4320 a great man die, the Supreme General, the most influential man in all recorded history, a man worship by many avid believers as a God because of his power and hated by just as many because of that same might.

As the news of the destruction spread around, the new of his death couldn't be hidden, some were happy and some were sad, but everyone was shocked all together as the almost impossible was accomplished.

The killing of the invincible Supreme General Haile, the legend of the Supreme General was now to be spread from generation to generation...

Though his journey may not yet be over.....

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