please_be_gentle_

One thing author got wrong is that flash is fast but not strong. One punch from him will not break concrete and ragdoll mc instead author could have written flash to unleash a flurry of punches to do damage to mc not one punch that could break concrete. It's bad writing on the authors part. Also mc could have dodged flash's some hits as he is a lighting human and normal humans have shown to dodged flash in dc.

this is great. keep up the good work author and need more chapters

geyh

geyh

+1 I wished in many fanfics for mc to kill sasuke before his eyes to give him a taste of his own medicine

sheetiest thing read in a while..........................................................................................................................

too much copy pasting from cannon is just ruining the novel. Even in canon she only became motivated to learn magic after watching rudeus use firework so just show any cool magic to her she will be motivated. you could have also motivated her by showing her a cool swordmanship move and promise to teach her that move if she learned arthimetic etc but mc has to be dumbasfk to teach a child something by beating her into it. Until now 67 chapters nothing has changed much from the cannon plot even small events like kidnapping incident is also the same. Also MC not being a peado by not going after silphy but instead encouraging Rudeus to groom her doesn't make it any less disgusting. I've been waiting for it to get better but it just keeps on getting worse.

Dany is too far gone.......MC would have to kill her

is this dropped

mc is weak asf so freed can easily whoop his ase. I'm still surprised he survived the first bout and made him retreat. It was probably due to his plot armour.