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Summoned with an SSS-Rank Portal Skill

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William and his college class are ripped from Earth and thrown into Aethel, a world on the brink of collapse. Everyone gains incredible magical powers – except William. Mocked and underestimated, he's an outcast among heroes. But William has a secret: an SSS-ranked skill that lets him travel to Aethel's past. Learning lost magic from ancient masters, he'll surpass his classmates and become the true savior Aethel needs. But can he overcome the dangers of the past and present to forge his own destiny? While others studied about the first mage, William could go back in time and see the first mage himself! While others dreamed of seeing a dragon, William could go back in time, hatch a legendary dragon egg and turn it into his puppy. While others used common materials to craft their items, William could go back in time and mine materials that weren't find anywhere in Aethel anymore. Is it unfair? Perhaps, but William was not the type of person to not use the powers the universe gave him.

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Chapter 1Transmigrated, and SSS Portal Skill

William tugged his worn backpack higher on his shoulder, his gaze fixed on the cracked pavement beneath his feet. The usual jeers and snickers followed him like a shadow. "Hey, Willy, did you remember to bring your blankie today?" Kevin, the school's star quarterback and resident bully, sneered, his cronies erupting in laughter.

William ignored them, his jaw clenched tight. He was used to it. Being the skinny, quiet kid with a scholarship to a prestigious academy made him a prime target. William just had to keep his head down, get through the day, and lose himself in the world of online RPGs and fantasy novels back in his tiny apartment.

He slipped into his usual seat at the back of the classroom, the worn copy of "The Chronicles of Aethel" already open on his desk. Aethel – a world of magic, mythical creatures, and ancient legends. It was William's escape, a world where he could imagine himself as a powerful hero, not the invisible nobody he was here.

Mr. Thompson, their hulking gym teacher with a booming voice and a permanent whistle around his neck, slammed the classroom door open, effectively silencing the pre-class chatter. "Alright, listen up, you bunch of slackers!" he roared. "Pop quiz on the history of basketball! And no cheating!"

A collective groan rippled through the room. Even Kevin looked dismayed. William, however, felt a flicker of hope. This was one quiz he could actually ace.

But fate, it seemed, had other plans.

A low hum, like a thousand bees buzzing in unison, suddenly filled the air. The fluorescent lights flickered ominously, casting long, dancing shadows across the room. A tremor ran through the floor, sending textbooks tumbling from desks.

"What the…?" Mr. Thompson's voice was cut short as a gaping rift, swirling with iridescent colors, tore open in the middle of the classroom. It pulsed with an otherworldly energy, drawing all eyes towards its mesmerizing depths.

Panic erupted. Screams filled the air as students scrambled away from the growing rift, desks and chairs clattering to the floor. Even Kevin, his face pale with fear, was frozen in place, his usual bravado forgotten.

William, however, felt a strange pull towards the rift, a sense of anticipation he couldn't explain. It was as if something deep within him recognized this strange phenomenon, beckoning him closer. He took a hesitant step forward, curiosity overcoming his fear.

Before anyone could react, a surge of energy erupted from the rift, engulfing the entire classroom in a blinding light. William felt a tugging sensation, a feeling of weightlessness, and then… nothing.

He awoke to the scent of pine needles and damp earth. Groaning, William sat up, his head pounding. The classroom, the rift, the panicked screams – it all felt like a distant, fever dream.

He was in a forest, sunlight filtering through the dense canopy of leaves above. Towering trees, unlike any William had ever seen, stretched towards the sky. The air was crisp and clean, with a faint, sweet fragrance that he couldn't place.

William wasn't alone. Scattered around him were his classmates, groaning and disoriented. Even Mr. Thompson was there, his whistle dangling limply from his neck, his usually booming voice reduced to a bewildered mumble.

"Where… where are we?" A girl's voice trembled with fear.

"What just happened?" another student cried.

William scrambled to his feet, his gaze sweeping across the unfamiliar surroundings. A sense of wonder mixed with apprehension filled him. This wasn't Earth. This was… different.

As William took in the alien landscape, a strange sensation tingled through his body. It started as a warmth in his chest, spreading outwards like a wave, until it settled in his mind, leaving behind a sense of clarity and… knowledge.

He closed his eyes, focusing on the sensation. Images flashed through his mind – a swirling vortex of colors, a sense of immense power, and then… words.

"SSS-Rank Skill: Portal – Activated."

A gasp escaped William's lips. The words echoed in his mind, their meaning slowly sinking in. He had a skill. An SSS-Rank skill. A portal skill.

A wave of dizziness washed over William, and he stumbled back against a tree trunk, his hand instinctively reaching for support. He closed his eyes, willing the nausea to subside. When he opened them again, a translucent blue screen hovered in front of him, filled with familiar RPG-like stats.

Name: William Velmont

Level: 1

Class: None

Attributes:

Strength: 10

Agility: 12

Stamina: 9

Intelligence: 15

Mana: 10

Skills:

Chrono Shift (SSS-Rank): Allows the user to open a portal to a specific point in the past. (Details Locked)

William stared at the screen, his heart pounding. It was real. This wasn't a game. He actually had a system, just like in those webnovels he devoured. But what did "Details Locked" mean? And how was he supposed to use this Chrono Shift ability?

"Whoa, check this out!" a voice exclaimed.

William turned to see Sarah, usually one of the quieter students, staring at a similar blue screen in front of her with wide eyes. "I have a system too! It says I'm a 'Celestial Archer' and I have an 'A-Rank Arrow of Light' skill!"

Others around them gasped, their initial fear giving way to a mixture of awe and excitement. It seemed everyone had a system, and they were impressive. Kevin, his arrogance somewhat restored, was boasting about his "S-Rank Iron Skin" skill, while Mr. Thompson, looking utterly bewildered, kept muttering about "divine intervention" and "the end times."

"I've got 'B-Rank Sonic Boom'! " shouted a student William vaguely recognized from his history class.

"Mine's 'A-Rank Elemental Control'! I wonder if I can shoot fireballs," another student exclaimed, his eyes gleaming with excitement.

William, however, couldn't shake the feeling that his SSS-Rank skill was something unique, something far more powerful than anything his classmates possessed. He just needed to figure out how to unlock its full potential.

As the students were busy comparing their newfound abilities, a rustling in the undergrowth caught their attention. A group of men emerged from the trees, clad in gleaming plate armor, their swords glinting in the sunlight. Behind them walked an elderly man in a flowing grey robe, his eyes glowing with an ethereal light.

"Greetings," the old man said, his voice surprisingly strong despite his age. "I am Maester Elric, and these are the Royal Guards of Aerilon. We have been expecting you."

A wave of murmurs rippled through the students. Expecting them? What did that mean?

Mr. Thompson, ever the protector (and perhaps seeking a sense of control in this chaotic situation), stepped forward. "Expecting us? Where are we? And why were we brought here?" he boomed, his voice regaining some of its usual authority.

Maester Elric smiled, his eyes twinkling. "You are in Aethel, brave souls. And you have been summoned here for a purpose. A great and noble purpose. You are the heroes destined to save our world."

He gestured towards the towering trees, beyond which a majestic stone temple could be seen, its steps leading towards the heavens. "Come with me to the Temple of Ascendancy. There, I will explain everything."

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Read all the free chapters so you don't have to. Please note that this is an objective look at the story and holds as little bias as possible. Also, my rating is based on 3 stars being average and 5 being close to perfect. Writing (3 Stars): Average. While the vocabulary and some choice descriptions throughout the novel are well utilized, there are some key things that hold it back. The lack of details, repeated phrases, grammar errors, overly used adjectives. While it's readable, there's definitely room for improvement. Words for author: Some ways to improve in this area are to run through the chapter with a comb and ensure little to no mistakes. You have a good grasp on vocabulary (should this not be AI or Chatgpt) but you seem to repeat things over and over again (i.e Whirlwind of steel, pressing his advantage, a feeling of warmth). You're on the right track, but you need to diversify. Story Development (3 Stars): Not bad, but also nothing too eye-catching. The story is simplistic and easy enough to follow. There are some creative moments that actually made me curious and desire to know more. However, for all the positive notes, there are many more negative points. One thing I believe is that a good story lies in the details. There's a distinct lack of it within the confines of the story. The plot rushes at times, drags out in others, fails to uphold continuity (the details I was referring to), and does really go in depth. A good example is the opening where William and the class are summoned to Aethel. We, as the readers, are supposed to sympathize with the protagonist and his plights but the author doesn't elaborate on the character interactions, the summoning itself, Williams past, or really the situation at hand. Also, time in this story is incredibly skewed. I have more things to note but I won't delve much deeper. Ways to improve: Don't be afraid to add depth. Currently, everything only tends to the surface level (as of the free chapters) and fails to elaborate in places that are needed. This ruins the immersion and leaves the readers feeling confused, ESPECIALLY in regards the story's continuity. Some things feel rushed, as if a piece of the story went missing during the writing process. Other times, details seem to change sporadically and make it hard to follow (i.e changes in places, lack of following set times, changes in items or objects, etc). Reread each chapter carefully and be sure they add up. Character Design (3 Stars): I actually wanted to give this 2 Stars. However, that would be unfair since I was comparing it to other top novels. For a regular novel, it's decent. The characters are easy enough to understand and aren't the most terrible thing in the world. Unfortunately, I can't help but voice my own qualms. Everything feels so surface level, and I believe it's primarily due to the lack of details. Character descriptions are incredibly vague and don't really offer much beyond small descriptors that last a few sentences at most. Even the MC isn't properly described other than being wimpy and nerdy with his head always stuck in a book. Characters themselves feel hollow, as if they're just existing. During my read, I felt nothing for any of the characters aside from MAYBE Gorn (even then it was a mild curiosity). They have little personality and their interactions with the MC feels like the dialogue with NPC characters in a video game. Characters should serve to add depth and intrigue to the story, but that wasn't the case (with the exception of Gorn and maybe the MC). Ways To Improve: Add more details. Describe the characters as needed, at least the ones who are gonna keep appearing (I can understand leaving some things to the imagination, but not everyone has that level of creativity). Where possible, give the characters some different personality, quirks, habits, likes, dislikes, etcetera. If all else fails and you can't think of something, at least have the characters talk like a normal person would. People are a reflection of their experiences and their personality should reflect that and the way they interact with other characters should in turn reflect that as well. Update Stability (4 Stars): This based off what Webnovel is telling me. You uploaded 9 chapters this week. Assuming this is the standard for you, I have nothing more to say. World Background (3 Stars): Like all fantasy stories, the world is full of potential. Magic to explore, mysteries to uncover, so many things to do. While this story doesn't do anything new or really impressive with its world, it was at least enough to keep me interested. That being said, this story suffers from a lack of details. I read 33 chapters and feel like I haven't learned all that much. While it's fine to have a slow pace, enticing the readers with glimpses of the possibilities helps to keep them hooked and thirsting for more. The world isn't bad, but it hasn't yet reached out and properly hooked me. Ways to Improve: More details. Smoothly offering some information where applicable is key. If it can add some depth and lore, do it. Information dumping is rather tedious and can be off putting, but it's still better than receiving absolutely nothing. Branch out and add some interesting topics. With all that being said, most of these issues could've been solved already or are being solved as the story continues. I'm not saying this novel is bad. I've seen much worse. However, it's far from perfect. But that's okay. I would still recommend this story to those who have free time on their hands and wish to watch how the author grows. The key to being a great storyteller is getting better as you move along. Either way, I hope you all (and the author) enjoy your read. 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