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"Nicholas Kyle Dunamis" "You have the ability to overcome great fear" "Should you choose to accept this ring you will one of the gaurdians of space sector 2814" -"huh?" -"go away I don't wanna be a lantern." The cover picture is not owned by me and is close to the appearance I want the MC to look like.

Solace_7649 · Anime e quadrinhos
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A problem

Hey guys who are reading this.

Thanks for the support so far. This along with my other one piece book was supposed to just be an attempt at writing. But now I really want to continue and give a proper story.

I will not change the previous chapters written unless I find glaring mistakes and plotholes for the future.

When I started this story I took inspiration from 'Viltrumite in Marvel World' by Ashtin_pratt, 'Marvel: Abstract entity' by kitshaar, 'Young Justice:UnReal' by Grand_White10, 'DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD' by CORNBRINGER and little ideas from 'Mutant Sorcerer in Marvel' by Sujtel_02.

A problem has come up. When the wishes were made I put a lot of thought on what exactly the wishes are and the path they will take. When I chose the fruit ability I had removed all logia(because I don't want one elemental beings) and also removed zoan (because there is no need for a physical increase and other elemental abilities could be achieved with magic or want he would gain further down the storyline). So only paramecia fruit abilities remained. Among the paramecian fruits I chose ope-ope no mi on more of a whim and also because it is much cooler than overly destructive fruits.

So this was the only wish I didn't put much thought into, only thinking that my MC should also be other things than tech and destruction. But now I recently read a fanfic called 'MHA:Horizon' by keanu_eugene and I thought more deeply of the fruit abilities and applications other than well surgery and spacial laws. I found that the fruit focuses on so many things related to surgery.

I got a lot of ideas on how to use ope-ope no mi but it conflicts a lot with how I was imagining the story later on. I had planned the details of every wish and how to proceed, even the gift, but ope-ope no mi while great doesn't show much development.

I need some ideas from your side on how you want the MC to use ope-ope no mi and I hope I will get ideas or inspiration from your suggestions. Please help and then I will try to integrate the ope-ope no mi properly with development and not just stagnate and be left behind by other powers.

Please give your suggestions in the chapter comments and not the paragraph if it is a suggestion.

Thank you. As soon as I think og my way forward I will continue the story. The next few chapters don't really have the ope-ope no mi usage but I want to finalize my plans before continuing.