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"Nicholas Kyle Dunamis" "You have the ability to overcome great fear" "Should you choose to accept this ring you will one of the gaurdians of space sector 2814" -"huh?" -"go away I don't wanna be a lantern." The cover picture is not owned by me and is close to the appearance I want the MC to look like.

Solace_7649 · Anime & Comics
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Hey guys!

So I thought of your suggestion and decided the path this(ope-ope no mi) power is going to take.

At first I just wanted it to be a trump card but I am now thinking of making it more prominent and relevant to the story therefore he will have to show these powers which he will use in conjunction with his swords.

By the way, about the swords, for those who didn't realize it I have taken select abilities of the characters that the MC looks like-- the blades look like kanshou and bakuya(Archer Emiya Shirou) while their abilities are in a way similar to tessaiga(Inuyasha) and tenseiga(Sesshomaru).

Later on he will discover more about his blades.

So people will find out about his weird powers(ope-ope no mi) which he will freely use soon enough.

One thing that I have now corrected from earlier chapters is that he is not a metahuman(DC) any more, rather he is a mutant(Marvel). His mutant ability is regeneration similar to Wolverine, though a little worse, and adaptation similar to Darwin though both will grow later on to become better.

His homo magi and mutant abilities will only awaken later on in his teenage years and only after that will his alien heritage awaken properly.

Anyways I am continuing this story for as long I can. I have also been trying to get a proper writing style and have been paying attention to other writers.

Hope you like and continue to like my story. Also please give constructive criticism while not crossing into the boundary of basically spitting on my writing.

Thank you!