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Rebirth : Naruto's World With Helper System

Autor: Morvian
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Xazch who feel rejected by world feeling dejected because no one want to be near him, all of them seeing him with disgust or fear since they know all unfortunate event will happened to everyone who's close to him. He didn't know about the real reason why all people did that to him since he didn't remember much his memories when he's child until he's teen. So after thinking his life is really unlucky and dull, he's walking around the park, when he's standing beside the tree while seeing people with envy. There's bunch of children which doing some seal with their hand while shouting something like bla...bla... Jutsu. Then with his curiousity winning over his indifference feeling to life, he ask them from afar while telling them to answer from there since he didn't want their parent scolding them because being close to him. After their answer given, he know there's existence like anime with video format which unlike pleasure video which he currently have within laptop. With that he is going to home with rush, then turning his laptop on just to find Naruto Anime. After that he's downloading all video which available then he watch the finished downloaded video while waiting for the rest of video downloaded. While he just watch Naruto animation for research’s sake, he finds it's good to spend his time but the world say otherwise. After he's killed by meteor which Earth guardian sent to erase his existence since his pendant which always steal the world energy around him. He's reborn into the world which he know since the anime he watch is about that current world which he born to. With restless mind knowing this world is in chaos for a month, then suddenly *Ding soul binding has been finished! *Ding initializing the Helper system! *Processing data! 0%.... 10% ..... 50% ... 80% ..... 100%! *Installing Helper's feature, applying data & saving data. ========================= Author's Note : • Since Webnovel APK has writing novel feature added, I can update whenever from phone. ========================= Update Schedule : • 3 Chapter Weekly - Maximum ========================= The chapter will vary from 1000 – 1500 word. ========================= Disclaimer : All character except those that didn't appear on author work is not mine. No infringement of these copyrights is intended, and is not authorized by the copyright holder. All original characters are the property of Masashi Kishimoto the Author of Naruto's series and manga.

Chapter 1Arc I - Chapter 01 : Born With Strange System!~

Uchiha Clan, somewhere that closes with clan's entrance gate there's a home that's not too big but not too small either.

Within it, there's a woman who has finished giving birth to her child and her little sister who attend to her needs.

The little sister suddenly asks her big sister while cleaning the room "So sister, what's name will you give to this child? Since he's your firstborn, I'm sure you will give him the best name for him!".

"Uchiha Xazch, I feel that this name suits him! Though we'll see if his father will agree, or maybe he wants to give the name himself?" Her older sister answered.

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Meanwhile, somewhere within the center of the Uchiha clan, there's a big building where people can almost see its status from building appearances.

Here's a place where the elite within the clan always gather for this location is the main clan residence, and at the door of the building there are 2 guards who're talking with a hush.

"Hey man, now you're a father already! When will you treat me to a big lunch for the celebration?"

"Haizz, later! After this shift is finished, I'll go back to my home while checking my wife and son's condition! Even though earlier my sister-in-law sent a message to me saying they're fine, I still have to see it with my own eyes!"

"Okay, no problem! How about tomorrow? Today you can spend all your time with your family, after all, you weren't there when you're needed! At least you need to compensate them now, it's about time to finish the shift so you should prepare to go back and not worry about it here because there's me who's still able to guard it alone since I'm sure nothing big will happen so you can go ahead with your preparation!"

"Thanks, friend, later then! Ah, I'm not worried about tomorrow! I'll treat you tomorrow to a restaurant, then you can eat all you want until your stomach bursts haha!"

"Okay, don't worry! Tomorrow I'll starve myself first, so I can empty your pocket hahaha!"

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{Xazch's POV}

It's been a month already since I was reborn into this world.

After this month, I found out that I was reborn into Naruto's world.

My mother's name is Ririko, while my father's name is Toru and lastly my aunt who's pinching my bottom when I was born is talkative Erize.

After my father hearing my mother about my name, he's reluctantly accepting that weird name though I don't know why my mother feels that's name suits me. The truth is that the name was my name in my past lives.

What's the meaning of my name? Well, that's not really my name but in my past world, the name that was given by my parents is too common!

So I'm creating my own nickname for cool namesake, but that's name now has its own meaning because it's my past trace and the mark of my new life.

Now let's continue! The first thing I do after getting born as a baby? Of course, suckling my own mother's milk breasts.

What do you expect from me as a baby? Do you think there's some kind of cheating that's accompanying me into this world?

Of course, no cheating exists and it's quite disappointing for me because I feel fear about the unknown, but that was until today.

After everyday suckling milk from my mother, my body and brain seem to be finished adapting to this world law or maybe gravitational? Well, whatever I don't know what it is.

Earlier, after my baby's nap, some strange sound ringing within my soul? Or conscious? Maybe my head? Well, the point is that sound is just me who is listening to it because surrounding me is like frozen its time?.

The content of its sound is more or less as follows.

*Ding soul binding is finished!

*Ding initializing the Helper system!

*Processing data! 0%.... 10% ..... 50% ... 80% ..... 100%!

*Installing Helper's feature, applying data & saving data.

blah... blah... it's quite long.

So this cheat of mine is not that overpowered, but not that average.

Unknown to him this system will become omnipotent, almost rivaling God's existence, though it will still lose if he lets the system battled with God.

Because it's like some supercomputer which processing data faster? But it's just too bad this cheat system is something incomplete because the data it gets is just from my laptop's storage.

While it seems to be good for some people, it's bad for me because my activity on my laptop is just watching some movies or playing some super casual game, there's MOBA, MMORPG game too and finally the anime with title Naruto that I finished downloading until its finish but too bad most of it is locked because I only watch about 20 episodes before I die.

So the rest of the data about this world is still locked, and I don't know how to get points for unlocking it. Why? Because the information has its price for me to see or watch? Maybe because it's an animation.

The episode of Naruto before Shippuden needs 10 Guide-Point for me to unlock per episode, the bad thing is my Guide-Point is 0[ZERO] so nothing.

I don't know how to get to that point, but thankfully this system seems to have more features, like talent customizing.

This feature is a one-time feature, it's still locked because I need to be at least 3 or 4 years and there's 10000 Talent-Point for me to use later, though I don't know how I got that big number.

There's a shop system too, but the content is too expensive for me right now and some of its content has a blur effect while it has column with % progressed. I think this feature still has not finished its installing, maybe it's still synchronizing with this world.

There's no inventory system but I get another thing that replaces inventory feature, it's red dot mark at the center of my forehead and from the information I got from it is that mark has its own world but it's still a small world but it will grow together with my power.

Then lastly, status! When I'm checking my status, the information that appears in my head is this:

Name : Uchiha Xazch

Health : Normal

Age : 1 Month

Sex : Male

HP : 5/5 | STA : 2/2 |

ATK : 0 | DEF : 0

STR : 1 | AGI : 0 | DEX : 1

CON : 2 | WIS : 1 | INT : 1

Charm : 10 | Charisma : 5 | Luck : 2

[Bloodline] [Talent] [Ability] [Skill]

This information is still temporary because I'm still a baby after all and the 0 is not exactly 0 but there's number behind it like 0.2 or etc but this system of mine is troublesome after all so bear with it.

ME!!

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Volume 0 :Auxiliary
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Morvian
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Keep up with your writing pace, just this week you give us 20 chapter release!! Good Job!!~ So can you stay like this and finish it till the end, this fanfic of your is unique! I don't know why but its feel like you really interact and listen to the fans of your fanfic! because you've sometimes give us big surprise that you took other advice on your next chapter. like there's some comment who's want you save Itachi and shisui then create good future for them to be alive then boom you gave it. though earlier i did check there's seem someone who's quite alike with teacher within the school of mine. My teacher who's should teach us his student himself but he always tell us to read the book and solve the question from the book and he just need to give rank for each of us! That person tell you to learn from writer from fanfiction.net by yourself, see that he's quite alike with my teacher, that scum teacher within my school is almost same that they have same thinking with giving bad rank its should give boost for learner or student to give their best but its always have opposite effect. in fact if they did teach theirself rather than tell us to study by ourself, his heart should be good but its should be the opposite so just ignore it. that double review seem personal attack with nothing within it that has mean to help but just giving negative effect where the translator and newbie author to be discouraged. this type person, you don't need to pay attention to his comment or review because earlier when I see from his profile its almost full negative comment to other author or translator.

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I'm giving you a five star because I want to cheer you on, it is making me happy that a lot of fanfic writers here in webnovel/qidian is taking on the Naruto verse, just like you I'm writing one as well. I'd like to share my experience with you maybe we could also exchange notes so we could better our own stories. One there will definitely be crazy fans of the original series who would notice even the slightest mistake it could be on techniques, timeline or touching specific characters. That's ok, it's your story keep on writing but it would help a lot if you research on the characters who are already existing in the canon so that you could better write your plots not just that but also consider their impact on the whole series, again it is just my opinion you are free to do what you want. I also have my troubles with the English grammar since like you I'm not a native speaker, it would really help though if you could read western novels since they sort of enhance your skills in English while reading it. Reading up online in subject verb agreements and other rules would help too there are online quizzes that are not so hard to access it would probably increase your readers once they could better understand your writing... I'm still trying to improve on my English Grammar as well like everyone is I'm not perfect, I'll never be. Try to make an outline so that you have a clear goal on where your writing will take you and not to write blindly base on your whims... I once did that I sort of release a few not so good chapters. It would also help if you have designed your characters and other important characters end goal like what techniques can they use, what kind of mastery they have how strong could they be... clearly your novel has a system that could make a lot of things possible so you have to keep track of that. Compile your crazy ideas in a notepad or word file it helps, I've been doing it a lot. Don't look at the word count... it sorts of limit you as well, I think you should base the end of a chapter base on your feeling as a writer. It's just my opinion though. :) Be more descriptive in writing, I guess it is quite hard since we are not native speakers of the language but like what they all say the start is always the hardest. Once you get used to it everything will be more free flowing for you... I'm not saying it's already like that to me because like you I'm also a journeyman in writing, I guess my big flaw would be I'm very detailed with my chapters that it takes too long for a one chapter to end to the point that it might bore my readers. just like this review its really long now hahaha. Bad reviews and criticisms are your friends they would help you on what you could improve on, since they took the time to scrutinize your work why not use it for yourself and improve your novel. That's what I did I never took their criticism as an attack instead I liked it because they point out things I could improve on. I think of them as my best friends while writing the webnovel. Again you have a great Idea keep on writing and just like everyone else I'm also fan of your work waiting for what's going to happen next. If I said anything that offended you in this post/review I apologize it is not my intent it never is, I only wanted to share my experience and hoped that you could share yours as well. like you it is also my first time writing a webnovel I would really love it if someone out of nowhere give me suggestions and criticism on how I could improve my work basically an editor right... Good luck and God bless!

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