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Hipknow
HipknowLv116yr
2018-06-03 05:07

Honestly this 'righteous' mc(is how i see it or its just the mc pitying Naruto characters and changing what made them who they were in the anime) is annoying, but its not the main reason on why the rating is so low. I've been around the block and read a ****-ton of fanfics from the happy go lucky to the heavy angst/insane character, the main reason i've rated it so low is because its so generic. I don't know how many fanfics I dropped because of the same plot each time, the only advice I could give to you haven't been to fanfiction.net go there and read what you shouldn't do. If i'm guessing right this might be your first novel so yeah its not gonna have the best writing quality but try to be unique.

Rebirth : Naruto's World With Helper System

Morvian
4.0
49 Chs

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KoFu_
KoFu_Lv6

The first helpful review I read on this spam of cheers/hate reviews. And nobody seems to take notice. You should be up there man.

6yr
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LuxVonDeux
LuxVonDeuxLv5

I like this kind of review, you give the author good advise without belittle him/her

6yr
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Nariyyah
NariyyahLv2

Reveal spoiler

6yr

jun
junLv4

Great story although its a little to fast with the plot..... I wish you make rhe part where thei fighting a little more with details Maybe it will give more satisfaction when reading it Hehehehe....just my little wish

6yr
Morvian
MorvianAuthor

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Gatot
GatotLv2

Keep up with your writing pace, just this week you give us 20 chapter release!! Good Job!!~ So can you stay like this and finish it till the end, this fanfic of your is unique! I don't know why but its feel like you really interact and listen to the fans of your fanfic! because you've sometimes give us big surprise that you took other advice on your next chapter. like there's some comment who's want you save Itachi and shisui then create good future for them to be alive then boom you gave it. though earlier i did check there's seem someone who's quite alike with teacher within the school of mine. My teacher who's should teach us his student himself but he always tell us to read the book and solve the question from the book and he just need to give rank for each of us! That person tell you to learn from writer from fanfiction.net by yourself, see that he's quite alike with my teacher, that scum teacher within my school is almost same that they have same thinking with giving bad rank its should give boost for learner or student to give their best but its always have opposite effect. in fact if they did teach theirself rather than tell us to study by ourself, his heart should be good but its should be the opposite so just ignore it. that double review seem personal attack with nothing within it that has mean to help but just giving negative effect where the translator and newbie author to be discouraged. this type person, you don't need to pay attention to his comment or review because earlier when I see from his profile its almost full negative comment to other author or translator.

6yr
Ashgar
AshgarLv2

wow MOAR SECT leader? you should live up to your sect name, give us your fan MOAR of chapter!!! after this week 20 chapter release, it's not enough!! how about 40 chapter? then it's should be good ☻. ckckck I'm aware how shameless I am, but i'm sure all your reader who is enjoying your fanfic should have same opinion with me ☻

6yr
Purnama_Lestari
Purnama_LestariLv2

MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!!

6yr
EternalGrowth
EternalGrowthLv5

I like your work. Hope you dont drop it But is one time feature like talent costumizer cannot put to use again?. Sorry for my bad english.................................

6yr
Dinoz
DinozLv4

woah, 20 chapter this week? did you duped? slow down please! it's not that i want you to stop writing, but i don't want you to suddenly stop yourself from writing because your drive gone later. seeing there's 2 negative review i fear because that person you will be discouraged so please relax yourself for a while then after your brain refreshed you can continue to write again. By the way that two negative review is from the same person? is that person has his own novel that he write with perfect grammar and the so called perfect plot by him? care to tell me his work link, everyone?

6yr
immortal8888
immortal8888Lv5

Keep up the work I really like the novel I always wanted a MC with such power Just continue with your work and don't drop it Its best that it's the the same time line with itachi

6yr
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