My Angel system
In old times a boy named Luis had lost his parents at a very tender age, he never even got to know who his parents were. With his parents gone he had to be taken care of by his wicked aunt who hardly fed him once a day, in effort to get food Luis was adviced to steal by a strange book without minding the punishment of burning given to thieves. When Luis was caught he ran into the forest and the villagers including his aunt chased him down with torches. "I think it's best I surrender now" Luis stopped running and was panting now. "I think I can see him!" he heard the village blacksmith shout. He took a little step backwards and down a hole he went. "Noooooo!!!" Luis screamed as he went down the hole, the last thing he saw was a red glowing light and then it was lights out for him. "What happened?" Luis groaned. "Where am I? And why is my body so cold" he said touching his arm" A screen appeard in front of him. [ System revived ] "What?" That was where the true journey began. Now the fate of mankind lies in his hands as he keeps completing tasks and quests to get stronger. Luis keeps getting stronger but the question is: Will he be able to stop Lucifer? Join my discord channel for more info about the novel. https://discord.gg/7DvJCBfvSy Also if you have time, you can check out The Angel System by ECM Manga.
Golden Aura After-Effects
"So the golden aura is in your body now," Nova said, looking at Luis from head to toe.
"Yeah, I tried to remove it but it's like it doesn't want to leave my body," Luis said.
"Don't even bother, once a golden aura is in your body it can't leave," Nova said, taking a sip from her juice.
"Huh? Why?" Luis asked.
"But don't worry, the aura is temporary and only lasts for seven days," Nova said.
'That's what the timer's for.' He said in realization subconsciously.
'It makes sense now.' Lena said.
"Okay but you still haven't told me how the golden aura is a bad thing," Luis said.
"It unbelievably increases your physical abilities and makes your ability cell points infinite quite alright but do you think acquiring power like that out of nowhere can come with a cost?" Nova said, taking another sip from her juice.
"What are you talking about?" Luis asked with a confused expression on his face.