This book was an incredibly frustrating read. First, let’s start with the awful grammar. It was riddled with run-on sentences, strange punctuation, and awkward phrasing that made it almost unreadable. It felt like I was reading something that skipped the editing process entirely.
As for the main character, he was supposed to be mature and aloof, but instead, he came off as childish and whiny. Every time a serious situation arose, he would respond with petty complaints or irrational decisions, making it impossible to take him seriously. It was hard to believe this was the protagonist who was supposed to carry the story. His lack of emotional depth and constant immature reactions made him more irritating than engaging.
On top of that, the book relied way too heavily on AI to drive the plot. Instead of letting the characters solve problems on their own, the author threw in AI as a solution to everything. It felt lazy and overdone, as if the writer had no idea how to naturally resolve conflicts. The excessive use of futuristic technology didn't add anything substantial to the story, and in fact, it made the world feel hollow.
To make matters worse, the author went into agonizing detail in places where none was needed. There were entire chapters devoted to describing irrelevant things like the layout of a room or the specifications of a gadget. Yet, when it came to character development or crucial plot points, those were skimmed over.
With terrible grammar, a main character who acts like a child when he's supposed to be mature, and an overreliance on AI, this book was a chore to get through. Definitely not worth the read.
