Rewriting: Need Feedback

Yo.

It's been a while, huh?

I'm still alive and kicking!

So I've been gone for a fuckin long while and tbh I have like two chapters still stored up for later but yeah. Sorry I haven't updated at all recently, however I've been feeling that this story had like potential and shit to be interesting and fun with a decent plot but my younger and more inexperienced self fucked up all those chances with poor decisions and stupid concepts.

Writers block basically

Like deadass I still think about how fuckin cringe the whole slave contract thing was and especially the slapping boruto in the chest scene like that shit physically pains me to think about lmao fuckin hell

Single worst part of this story IMO

Alright whatever that doesn't matter rn

I need ur guys' help. Everyone whose been supportin/readin the story, like Overlord.

I want you guys to tell me what aspects of this story you...

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Liked:

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Disliked:

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Dont be a dickhead but be deadass-honest when you tell me things.

I want constructive feedback and suggestions on ways I could improve the story in the rewrite. So this story can achieve its true potential.

Using the knowledge gained from ur guys' feedback... I fully intend to rewrite this story.

Ill likely keep some plot points, scenes, character interactions, rawdoggin etc. you guys liked from the original, but likely with a different spin on them.

As for the points you DISLIKED, I will either choose to remove it/replace it, improve on what's there, or rewrite the entire thing while keeping the core of it.

That's all I need from you guys.

I'll be waiting for you lovely fucks to engage lol

I may publish a new novel soon as well. I got sum cookin in the malevolent kitchen trust trust

Aight love you guys hope yall mfs enjoy the summer :)