Chaotic Journey.

I do not know whether it is deliberate or not, but by writing that they ignore him because he dont have destruction power you change their personality to something other than in the novel and anime. The Gremory family was known for their forbearance even in the anime, this shows in their dealings with Sairaog. After that you write that he is condemned to be a low-class devil, but everyone born in noble families is born a higher-class devil.

Things I hate about in this fanfic -Drama -His laugh "fufufufu" -Gregory is known for caring for each other, so on. but they neglect him because he dont has the power of destruction. -I want him to focus on the DXD world but it takes 50+ chapters for Dxd to show up -he needs from his family but he never loves his family(vergo so on) - it's hard to read not from grammar -annoying that's all. this is the second fic that is skipped over 50+ chapters.

Haven't read any of it yet, just wanted to point out that it says power of destruction is a gremory ability in the synopsis, it's actually a bael ability that sirzechs and ties have since venalana was a bael that married into the family. not criticism, just wanted to let the author know.

You know how this will read. The story is a power fantasy with an edgelord protagonist, the story has a case of world-hopping ADHD, and I think I would judge you if you took any lessons from this. On the other hand, the writing quality is fairly good and its fairly up-front about what it is. I’ve read to chapter 97 and a few problems stand out. The children act like adults, the characters are surface level with no real delth, the ever increasing herem means that most of the characters are narratively useless and exist only for fan-service, the world hopping means the main plot is ignored for 40+ chapters at a time and is replaced by a random B plot, and the story often reads like the inner ramblings of an edgy chunni with abandoment issues. In short, exactly what you expect. If you need a power-fantasy, then load up chapter one and leave your brain in the off position.

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So far I love it... You earned it

The novel is very good, the way it is written, the dialogues and the interaction of the characters are written well, in addition to the development of events and the course of the fighting, it is written with great skill, in short, in terms of the quality of writing, the background of the world, the development of the story and the updates deserve to get the full mark. This is proof of the skills and abilities of the author. But despite all of this, I will not continue reading the novel because how do I say this that the main character is a madman who is a psychopath in whom there is nothing to make me feel emotionally or respected for. He is a hypocritical, petty, stupid, arrogant idiot in every sense of the word. He kills tens of thousands of people for trivial reasons, r**p women, kills children and the weak just for his fun. In short, he is Doflamingo from One Piece. I wouldn't care about his death, or even the death of his crazy women or family, in fact, I wish they all died. He thinks himself to be the most pathetic person in the world. Yes, how painful it is that your family does not care about you when you own a palace and enough pocket money to live however you want. At the end of the talk it's the worst and dumbest Mc I've ever read in my life I hope the novel ends with his death because of 💩. I hope this novel falls and the author starts writing a novel in which the MC is not an idiot and cocky. I don't mean to insult or belittle the author's work in this review, and I hope that after this novel ends or is dropped, the new novel will talk about a natural presenter who is not a lunatic who enjoys murder, r*pe, and torture. Thank you and I wish you good luck. 👍👍

Everything in this fanfic feels forced, the interactions are weird and the background is nil everyone just seems to accept things like it is the simplest thing. It's not a bad fanfic just that i don't like it.

I came here literally because of the cover that depicting Venelana. So far absolutely disappointed. To be fair I just read through the Summary. and since It's clear you will not bang Venelana anytime soon or even maybe ever, well...

Had really high expectations came out super disappointed. I was expecting a DXD fanfic got that but about 3% rest of it is other stuff like I have no choise but to drop it. Really tried to read this one but couldn't. Author should have just said it was gonna have a sprinkle of dxd in it.

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I enjoy OP protagonists and like the style the author is going for. the writing and plot aren't bad, but they suffer due to the characters especially the MC. he is an edgelord and despite the author intent comes off as stupid and childish. The interaction between MC and any other character is dull and pointless. the main reason I keep going till I caught up was Vergo and a desire that the MC change as a person. might come back hope it gets better.

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Good book i like the concept and story keep it up👍🏾👍🏾; And do you know any other novels like this one meaning the mc is mistreated then he gets really op all the ones i find are short

it's seems the author die by covid ,. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . RIP AUTHOR you will be remember ..

Have read a similar story with naruto as the mc in the Xdx world. The parents there were way more inline with their canon self and didn’t outright abandon him (Siezerch is a chill dude and I’m pretty surr Grayfiya wouldn’t allow one if her sons to become a wuxia young master). But yeah just ranting don’t mind me. Nice start btw Oh also, if you want these kind of fanfics where mc is neglected then he trains, comes back and bashes his parents where they realize their mistakes and hate themselves for it, you can find loads of them on fanfiction.net with naruto as the mc (the minato and kushina bashing in these stories is real)

I like your other work protagonist killer and the system from it where you can buy the power from bleach world not other world and i enjoy the enjoy aizen vs isan where the mc lose. ThE summary is like Another fanfic call dxd forgotten son of destruction

HEHEHEHEHE HEHEHEHE (Creepy Laugh) Although I haven't read this but when I look at the synopsis I feel this novel has potential, I hope this will not disappoint me 😈

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS NOVEL!!!! .............. ......... ...................................................................... ...

Its still pretty early to write a full review, but so far its a pretty good revenge story. I would have preferred to start the actual story with him being a little older because having a child leading multiple adults in mafia style make it somewhat comical for me especially since his personality is childish too. My biggest worry is him visiting worlds and bringing a ton of characters "home". I would much prefer to have less characters and have more time with them, because with this pace after a few worlds it will be a challenge to remember all the characters for the readers and it feels really awkward too like Shiro getting that clingy with him with barely having any interaction. Besides Vergo (which was done pretty well) none of the characters really got enough screen-time and story with the mc to make for a good introduction in my opinion. Also its a common issue with this kind of fan-fictions to write with the viewpoint of somebody who have seen/read the original works, which can be expected normally but the story just started and we already got animes like no game no life, one piece, HxH included and eventually most readers will have a story arc where an anime is visited they didn't see. And especially the HxH arc would have been really confusing for somebody who didn't know the original. Finally the setting is really good, its rare to see a story well written from a completely different starting point with the story taking place so far in the underworld instead of the human world where the source anime starts with. So far it looks good and I'm looking forward how this story progress.