Ah really?

the story is actually pretty good. my only problem is the MC, he simps for the first person he meets basically. and forgives them after they went on a murderous rampage and almost killed him, even using a skill that previously had a 100% kill rate. he forgives them instantly. his attitude never changes throughout the story, theres been near 0 character progression. he's treating his life as a story and not questioning anything. overall if your looking for an average isekai fanfic, its not bad. as long as your fine with a masochistic simp MC, that is.

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Praise the sun y'all! He's back! Good story so far with good character interaction and progress. Looking forward to more. Can't wait to see where this will go and what direction the story will take

.... ..... ...... Oh, yes I do remember this auhtor. He was writting like 20 chapters in a day, and that's was unreadable. Like a big wall of text riddled with so many mistakes, that it's was hard. And hooray, it's actually become better ! Well... In a grammar sense at least. Story itself is just chaotic mess without any direction or sense. He literally write anything that he can. So yeah. Things like : Atrocious forced moments where mc just forgets how to breath and those on the verge of the death. Or characters that doesn't acts as themselves. Or mc that doesn't have character... At all. Don't even mention plots or sub-plots. He just going in different world and taking "useful" people. Conclusion: if we compare old auhtor works with New one, you can easily see winner. Like between 14 years boy and 16 year in a physical power. (probably what happened here) But it's still just a random cringe mess without actual plot. You can try if you are dead bored.

I liked this fanfiction, but since the trip to the world of Naruto we have the impression that it is no longer the same author who writes this story, I think some people have noticed. The part of the training in Danmachi was in my eyes very well written and pleasant to read, but in one chapter, the author completely changed his characters and the unfolding of his story, the MC that I found prudent and a little intelligent ended up being an MC similar to other fanfiction, without a 'living' character and without realism. I am deeply shocked and disappointed, i don't know if something has happened in the author's life in the meantime, but you can feel a total contrast in this story between the beginning and now. The worst is that many seem to appreciate the advancement of the story, It ends up being a fanfiction like the majority on this site, it only misses the crop of girls like shopping then it will be exactly identical to other fanfictions written by teenagers.

Totally amazing.. This novel is a masterpiece can't wait for more chapters Totally amazing.. This novel is a masterpiece can't wait for more chapters Totally amazing.. This novel is a masterpiece can't wait for more chapters Totally amazing.. This novel is a masterpiece can't wait for more chapters Totally amazing.. This novel is a masterpiece can't wait for more chapters Totally amazing.. This novel is a masterpiece can't wait for more chapters Totally amazing.. This novel is a masterpiece can't wait for more chapters Totally amazing.. This novel is a masterpiece can't wait for more chapters

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7th book compared to their other fanfics this is very good it got on top charts and is an entertaining read it's more of a 4.5 stars but I'll give five for a hardworking author

glad your back writing again. this story is well, makes you feel cozy. you dont have to be stressed because of some drama. just like some relaxing vacation that makes you entertained. hope you continue writing.

Rocky start but it starts getting better.

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will old novels be updated? ............................... ..............................................................

As all the other fanfic of this author I think this one will be great too. Till now it's very entertaining.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

this fanfic is good but the pace is too fast for me. Well i hope a slow pace fanfic .................................... ....................................

So far im liking it. Story is interesting, humors good, only real complaint so far is not enough chapters lol. keep it up...................

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