A readable Naruto fanfic. (Naruto, The Gamer, OC)

The writing quality does not disappoint, as the title says. Unlike most other novels on this site you can actually read this story, without instinctively reaching for the closest bottle of bleach to rub into your eyes. Update rate is stable and has been on a daily frequency for the last week, don't know if it will remain that way. Story developement is too slow for my tastes. After 10 chapters Cole got a few abilities and brainstormed uses for them, but that's it. If it goes on like this we'll be at chapter 100 when the chunin exams start. Character Design is just wow. Cole doesn't say the right thing all the time, conversations don't always go his way, but he shows emotional depth and understands his mistakes. He's a normal human so to speak. On World Background, come on, it's Naruto. Really great overall.

So far pretty good I honestly don’t know how our mc is going to move forward but still I’d give it a try. Literally the only thing I didn’t like was him over using his “eye ability” out in public so many times he started screaming in public but that only bothers me because I have bad social anxiety.

A naruto fanfic that doesn't involve super over the top powers from the start. instead in mid class power that has to be developed over time. please keep up the good work.

Honestly, just for the NSFW chapter alone I'd rate this a 5 star novel. Unlike most of the garbage 'smut' on this site, that is just 3 paragraphs of boring, non-descript penetration, without any foreplay or feeling in general, this actually reads like an off the shelf erotica. Some very solid smut. But yeah, the rest of the novel: Grammar is perfect, I think I only saw a few spelling mistakes over 13 chapter. Updates are also stable and I hope it stays that way. Story is too slow. Character Design is part of the story problem. The MC isn't weak, but normal. That means he does not fight bandits and horned rabbits in the first chapter and bathes in their blood to acquire power, nor does he have the strength to do so in the first place. So the main character has to find other ways to level and that is taking a long, long time. World Background is normal Naruto, so yay.

the title is false. thus fanfiction is less readable than the others. the author announce a slow development but nothing happen. the transition between the chapter is bad or nonexistent. I'll see in the future if the story becomes better and change my review