Porthos10
student and beginner writer I may make mistakes, so tell me so that I can fix it currently have no time to write
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Porthos101mthRespondeu a NatetheGreatCh 37 -Chapitre 33-- Porthos101mthComentouCh 1 Chapter 1: A Son's Burden: Life with the Mad King
- Porthos101mthRespondeu a Porthos10Ch 38 Chapter 37
- Porthos101mthRespondeu a Porthos10Ch 38 Chapter 37
- Porthos101mthComentouCh 38 Chapter 37
- Porthos102mthComentouCh 23 Secred du Roi
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Secred du Roi - Porthos104mthComentouCh 40 Chapter 40: “Harry’s Martial Arts Journey”
- Porthos104mthComentouCh 24 Chapter 24: “The Turn of Fate”
- Porthos104mthComentouCh 21 Chapter 21: “The Diverging Journeys”
- Porthos104mthComentouCh 20 Chapter 20: “The Path Unchosen”
- Porthos104mthComentou
just fix your common mistakes pls
During the nigth due to the sudden attack of the masked man the nine tails was released and lord fourth sacrifisied his life for the village to seal the nine tails . - Porthos104mthRespondeu a _Wint3r_
we can leave the story but do not lie, saying that there are no fillers[img=faceslap] it's a slow pace story with 50 chapters that can be gathered in 25 and even some of them have no utility. I thought you were different from patreon author but maybe I was wrong
[8:01] - Porthos105mthPostado
just read the 2 first arcs, and you'll understand ...even the main characters in the first Disney movies encounters more difficulties. Boruto 5 years old, wants to learn new skills he ask naruto friend and it's done. he learns new skills in one try, flirts with every girl whatever their ages and nobody care about that....if you manage to avoid that in your read, it's not bad written.
- Porthos105mthRespondeu a HeWhoWasRevered
just read your paragraph.
Shisui along with his friend Itachi that he meet on the way to check for daisuke at the small forest,the two we're seen having a conversation about something as they entered the forest they began to split up to cover more ground as 2 minutes later Itachi found Daisuke lying down near a tree seemingly in an unconscious state as he decided to check if his still breathing. - Porthos105mthComentou
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Shisui along with his friend Itachi that he meet on the way to check for daisuke at the small forest,the two we're seen having a conversation about something as they entered the forest they began to split up to cover more ground as 2 minutes later Itachi found Daisuke lying down near a tree seemingly in an unconscious state as he decided to check if his still breathing. - Porthos105mthComentouCh 29 Chapter 29: Annoying Friends