josuamarques

Yeah, that would be a smart idea, I just don't know what name I'd give it.

Well, reviews are supposed to be a helpful tool, it's another thing entirely what the reviewer makes of it. And I don't think his review was helpful in any way whatsoever. Firstly, if you can't expand on a point you made, just don't make the point in the first place. Secondly, you can't tell me the ego-card or his base review, where he calls this story 'unreadable' in the first sentence, is respectful to me. I'm human and write this story while working full-time, I won't be unbiased.

Real talk, I kinda wanted to make him an immortal tank... He got the base skills for it

BRUH

Thank you for pointing that out <3

Play with fire and you get burned...

... Not entirely

It isn't tho?

You won't find a party system or exp.

Thanks man. Yeah, those smut scenes are super whack and make little sense. The worst are the ones where the dude does no foreplay at all and the girl is flooding downstairs already.