get well soon man

how about this?

man i hope you stop this it's really annoying

As long as you don't drop it, it's fine and for the future you might wanna hold back any more new templates from gacha than he already has a basic build that a character can be based of any more and previous character templates will be forgotten and you might end paying all the attention to making sure all the powers acquired are being used and story might suffer but if you build up on what you have this character is gonna be awesome. Just a suggestion

Most of the time self inserts are atleast somewhat related to writers themselves as it is wish fulfillment, if that's the case with you then dude you must really hate yourself. i am obviously dropping this and good luck to you.

you need to keep in mind that the characters you are writing about are adults with responsibilities, people like them don't get excited about things or at least they don't show them on their faces, specifically a lord paramount of north won't say "wow". the moment i read that i closed the tab immediately. just try to understand the frame of mind of the character.

It's gurararara

This is an interesting premise can't wait for next chapters

hope u get better man good luck

man i really hope u don't drop this

dude ur story is good hope u come back

done

I just hope u don't drop this

don't fall into the trap of following canon man it's not worth forcing ur story

I really like the cheat of the mc I mean seriously it is one of the best obes out there

dude ur story is good u don't need to listen to anyone just keep going

This is hands down one of the best fanfic of one piece of all time............................................ ..............................

a good gamer story after quite a while

dude ur story is awesome don't worry about idiots

Dropping it... I can actually feel my brain dying and no not brain cells but my entire brain wants to die..........………………….…….…………………………………… I mean it seriously sucks