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Excellent story with some exciting new themes being introduced. Felt good to see some good pacing in the story although ending felt a bit too rushed. If the later half of the Shippuden arc was handled a little better then it would have been great.

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The story is well written, has been well planned and seems to flow well. Need to read some more for now before making an accurate review but so far the story has been impressive. Overall a good read.

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Nicely done

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